Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/7/21, 11:41 PM
Ohhh, I'd love to see anything related to the more times they come the more they grow
1/7/21, 10:53 PM
Ready for the next chapter!
Daniel
1/7/21, 10:31 PM
Reminded me off an episode of THE TWILIGHT ZONE I.J.S.
Daniel
1/7/21, 10:16 PM
Agree with EAG. I.J.S.
Daniel
1/7/21, 10:07 PM
Getting HOTTER !! I.J.S.
1/7/21, 10:06 PM
@Oblgatonym thank you for all the lovely comments. Based on your feedback I decided to remove the horror tag because I decided that the scariness of this one part is adequately covered by the fairytale tag. After all plenty of scary things happen in fairy tales. As to Comet's past, well, I guess you'll just have to wait and find out if I address that or not in the upcoming chapters.
Oblgatonym
1/7/21, 10:02 PM
I left this for last bc I was a bit scared of the "horror" tag, but it honestly wasn't that bad. Maybe you should consider removing it? I almost didnt read any of this story bc I was afraid it would be violent and scary, but in fact it was one of the best feel-goody, fluffy story I have read in a while. Also, I am now a bit concerned about Comet's past... What kind of mega douche-bag was he before? Does he remember? Did he repent from it? Or was his mind just magically wiped?
Daniel
1/7/21, 9:47 PM
Want to see where this goes. I.J.S.
1/7/21, 9:42 PM
To Daniel. Sorry, but I have no idea what that means.
Daniel
1/7/21, 9:30 PM
Hypnosis and corruption please, other characters would be great. I.J.S.