Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/8/21, 4:37 PM
Thank you man! I really appreciate it and I'm very grateful for the positive reception it's been having. Part two is almost done hope you like it as well. And props for recognizing the general guy! that was a great game.
1/8/21, 3:48 PM
Such an incredibly hot story! I hope that there will be more in this series.
1/8/21, 2:00 PM
so hot man, thank you!
1/8/21, 1:55 PM
Very hot
1/8/21, 1:38 PM
Very hot! I was just hoping we'd get more scenes of John and Rod reinforcing each other's programming to squat and masturbate.
1/8/21, 1:10 PM
I imagine Tim's in for quite the surprise when Mikael gets home, especially if Seth's dildo is still in his pussy. I think changing "Sir" to "sir" as Jack/Seth's control begins to sink in would be a subtle way of signaling the power change that happens just as subtly for Mikael. Your views of the church aren't extreme, and I applaud the mention of Kant and Seth's distinction between beings of evil v beings of chaos. I especially liked the way Seth chose to use his new recruit to be a force for change rather than just making him a dumb himbo devoted to demon dick.
1/8/21, 12:39 PM
like your stories, continue the good work. can't wait to see the transformations that may lie ahead.....
1/8/21, 12:25 PM
please continue this so good & hot.....UwU
JRL
1/8/21, 11:17 AM
So. Fucking. Hot. you are an amazing writer. Love what you're going for here. Keep it (and me) coming please!
1/8/21, 10:26 AM
The story idea was not bad. I liked the idea of revenge through hypnosis though the long term enactment of the plan stretched the bonds of "suspension of belief" and the exposition could have been shorter. I did especially like where the protagonist lost control of the revenge plot for a bit of time but thought the description of the sex could have been hotter. All in all, while the story lost a bit by the focus being on making sure the reader understood all the steps taken to in act the revenge and the motivation, instead of the sex itself, I would give it a thumbs up.