Recent Comments

1/6/21, 2:14 PM
Thanks so much for all your kind words! I'm glad you folks like this one and are having as much fun reading as I did writing! Your feedback really encourages me to keep writing! I honestly was just as surprised when Griffin decided he was going to seek out and fuck the Kraken xD in my first draft.
1/6/21, 2:13 PM
Loved it bro. Stoners are so fuckin' hot.
Dec 31, 2020
1/6/21, 1:48 PM
What I especially love in this story is that in addition to the smouldering hot dynamic and the very sexy ending, you don't really try to like, magically solve Francis' chronic pain. You depict a healthy and positive attitude toward his progress and quickly show without ever mentioning it directly that he's still desirable and can lead a full, sexy life even with the pain and disability. That means a lot! As usual, your writing is incredibly good and sexy.
Dec 31, 2020
1/6/21, 1:42 PM
Awww, I loved Noel's unerring confidence and kind demeanor in this story, and the very hot results of that. It's a very sweet and wholesome sexy story, through and through.
Dec 31, 2020
1/6/21, 1:36 PM
I loved getting a peek into all these different multiverses and I became really invested in seeing who would wind up together! It made me think of a short story called "Happy Endings". Really well-written!
1/6/21, 1:31 PM
I love the character dynamics you set up so quickly and deftly in each scene. You could feel their reputations in the school coming through in the crowd's reactions. I also loved the way you used enemy-to-lovers here -- it felt way better than actual revenge would have and they make a very sweet couple. Incredibly well-written and super hot!
1/6/21, 1:29 PM
This was INCREDIBLE! Guys getting potted out, slow, and lazy is one of my biggest turn-ons, and it shows up so rarely here. The transformation aspect and intelligence draining were amazing! :)
Jan 6, 2021
1/6/21, 1:26 PM
You manage to up the ante really quick in this story and it is very, very hot. I especially like the part where you get into this new slave's mindset and his devotion to Master -- it's really sexy.
Jan 6, 2021
1/6/21, 1:04 PM
This story is making me think that A) my own poker games lack imagination, and B) I'm glad they do, because I'm not that good at poker. You took on a big challenge with four characters in a 1,000-word story and did wonderfully. Nice progression of mental changes and heightening of the sexual tension between the guys throughout. Nicely done!
1/6/21, 12:16 PM
@keeprofd he will think its part of the rehabilitation program for the criminals