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1/6/21, 1:31 PM
I love the character dynamics you set up so quickly and deftly in each scene. You could feel their reputations in the school coming through in the crowd's reactions. I also loved the way you used enemy-to-lovers here -- it felt way better than actual revenge would have and they make a very sweet couple. Incredibly well-written and super hot!
1/6/21, 1:29 PM
This was INCREDIBLE! Guys getting potted out, slow, and lazy is one of my biggest turn-ons, and it shows up so rarely here. The transformation aspect and intelligence draining were amazing! :)
Jan 6, 2021
1/6/21, 1:26 PM
You manage to up the ante really quick in this story and it is very, very hot. I especially like the part where you get into this new slave's mindset and his devotion to Master -- it's really sexy.
Jan 6, 2021
1/6/21, 1:04 PM
This story is making me think that A) my own poker games lack imagination, and B) I'm glad they do, because I'm not that good at poker. You took on a big challenge with four characters in a 1,000-word story and did wonderfully. Nice progression of mental changes and heightening of the sexual tension between the guys throughout. Nicely done!
1/6/21, 12:16 PM
@keeprofd he will think its part of the rehabilitation program for the criminals
Jack
1/6/21, 12:05 PM
nice one
Daniel
1/6/21, 7:21 AM
One of the hottest stories I have ever read- BRAVO SIR. I.J.S.
Dec 17, 2020
Anonymous
1/6/21, 6:39 AM
Creative and sexy, more please I.J.S.
1/6/21, 5:13 AM
Oh nice! Love this chapter, would love it if Kyle can get his mind free but still has to obey his orders and they fuck him while he's protesting!
FantasyWithKinks
1/6/21, 4:54 AM
*"Let's talk consent and boundaries"* the kraken says... I don't think I've ever laughed so hard at porn as I have at this.