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giveintothemusk
1/5/21, 2:36 AM
Need need need an update! Hahahaha ๐Ÿ™
1/5/21, 1:54 AM
great job! Loved it!
1/5/21, 1:09 AM
Pile the humiliation on! Thanks for the longer chapter. It's always great when the superhero gets so close to getting out of the situation, only to get sucked right back in. Im hoping for more modifications to Kyle's uniform. Maybe a two piece suit? I wonder whats going to happen if that video gets out.....
Aug 12, 2018
1/5/21, 12:59 AM
That was such a fucking hot slob transformation story. Fuck yeah.
1/5/21, 12:49 AM
Glad you are continuing this story. Looking forward to reading more.
1/5/21, 12:48 AM
So hot. Just the right amount of tension that makes you really want to see that hot unaware dad/son pair go at it for the pleasure of Dr Cullen
1/5/21, 12:31 AM
An extremely hot, well-written story!
Anonymous
1/4/21, 11:38 PM
i enjoyed this a lot! hopefully you will continue!
Anonymous
1/4/21, 10:39 PM
Another sexy chapter, although the story keeps flipping between Jalen and Jaden which breaks some of the immersion. If you can find the time to go back and fix that itโ€™d help the quality of the writing shine :)
1/4/21, 8:53 PM
You're so right, Kaksks. I decided to cut scene and skip to several hours later, partly because I didn't feel like writing a detailed scene of mental resistance and submission, but also because I imagined that in this case it would be a pretty slow process, one that would last for hours and couldn't easily be conveyed in "real time." I felt like, at the beginning, it would really feel like more of a rape scene, as Liam struggles against Paul and Martin penetrating him with their foot-long cocks. And while I wanted to allude to that, I didn't really feel like depicting it in graphic detail.