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1/5/21, 1:09 AM
Pile the humiliation on! Thanks for the longer chapter. It's always great when the superhero gets so close to getting out of the situation, only to get sucked right back in. Im hoping for more modifications to Kyle's uniform. Maybe a two piece suit? I wonder whats going to happen if that video gets out.....
Aug 12, 2018
1/5/21, 12:59 AM
That was such a fucking hot slob transformation story. Fuck yeah.
1/5/21, 12:49 AM
Glad you are continuing this story. Looking forward to reading more.
1/5/21, 12:48 AM
So hot. Just the right amount of tension that makes you really want to see that hot unaware dad/son pair go at it for the pleasure of Dr Cullen
1/5/21, 12:31 AM
An extremely hot, well-written story!
Anonymous
1/4/21, 11:38 PM
i enjoyed this a lot! hopefully you will continue!
Anonymous
1/4/21, 10:39 PM
Another sexy chapter, although the story keeps flipping between Jalen and Jaden which breaks some of the immersion. If you can find the time to go back and fix that it’d help the quality of the writing shine :)
1/4/21, 8:53 PM
You're so right, Kaksks. I decided to cut scene and skip to several hours later, partly because I didn't feel like writing a detailed scene of mental resistance and submission, but also because I imagined that in this case it would be a pretty slow process, one that would last for hours and couldn't easily be conveyed in "real time." I felt like, at the beginning, it would really feel like more of a rape scene, as Liam struggles against Paul and Martin penetrating him with their foot-long cocks. And while I wanted to allude to that, I didn't really feel like depicting it in graphic detail.
1/4/21, 8:34 PM
I loved this chapter, very hot story. If I may, though - one of my favorite parts of your stories is the detailed description of the moment when the main character succumbs, and it seems like we fast-forwarded past that part this time. I would have loved to read about how it felt as the plastic pushed deeper and deeper into him and fused with his brain or spinal cord, for example.
1/4/21, 6:14 PM
Somnus, don't give up on your half-finished stories. You don't know how long I've been hacking away at this one. I wrote the first little section (the opening scene with Liam and Martin) more than two years ago, then I wrote the next section (up to Paul's arrival) about two months ago, and then I finally found time and inspiration to finish it all up yesterday. I don't really like writing that way, because it's hard for me to get back into the erotic groove of a story after I put it down for a while. But it can be done. As with anything, practice makes perfect.