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Anonymous
1/4/21, 11:38 PM
i enjoyed this a lot! hopefully you will continue!
Anonymous
1/4/21, 10:39 PM
Another sexy chapter, although the story keeps flipping between Jalen and Jaden which breaks some of the immersion. If you can find the time to go back and fix that it’d help the quality of the writing shine :)
1/4/21, 8:53 PM
You're so right, Kaksks. I decided to cut scene and skip to several hours later, partly because I didn't feel like writing a detailed scene of mental resistance and submission, but also because I imagined that in this case it would be a pretty slow process, one that would last for hours and couldn't easily be conveyed in "real time." I felt like, at the beginning, it would really feel like more of a rape scene, as Liam struggles against Paul and Martin penetrating him with their foot-long cocks. And while I wanted to allude to that, I didn't really feel like depicting it in graphic detail.
1/4/21, 8:34 PM
I loved this chapter, very hot story. If I may, though - one of my favorite parts of your stories is the detailed description of the moment when the main character succumbs, and it seems like we fast-forwarded past that part this time. I would have loved to read about how it felt as the plastic pushed deeper and deeper into him and fused with his brain or spinal cord, for example.
1/4/21, 6:14 PM
Somnus, don't give up on your half-finished stories. You don't know how long I've been hacking away at this one. I wrote the first little section (the opening scene with Liam and Martin) more than two years ago, then I wrote the next section (up to Paul's arrival) about two months ago, and then I finally found time and inspiration to finish it all up yesterday. I don't really like writing that way, because it's hard for me to get back into the erotic groove of a story after I put it down for a while. But it can be done. As with anything, practice makes perfect.
1/4/21, 5:59 PM
Hot! I love it !
1/4/21, 5:53 PM
Proper pacing, hot story, indeed good as a standalone. Very hot!
Somnus
1/4/21, 5:19 PM
Another top notch story. I don't recall really liking the first two installments but i'm loving this which i do think speaks to how well it works as a stand alone. Simple but effective world building, sexy scenes and a hot transformation. What more could we ask for? I have so many half finished stories and bullet pointed ideas. Tbh it's in hopes of producing something of this quality that I keep hacking away at my little projects..
1/4/21, 5:19 PM
Great work!
1/4/21, 4:16 PM
Oh wow this story is so sweet and sexy x3