Recent Comments

boi98229
1/4/21, 8:06 AM
This story keeps getting hotter and hotter!! Thanks so much for your imagination and willingness to share, even to the point of writing your first story! My own kinks include pheromones, hypnosis, mind control, transformations. i also love the idea of male hierarchical family so am very much looking forward to meeting the rest of the family. I have noticed a few odd cases of misused words and awkward unusual ways of wording things. i used to have a partner who was an English major and a copy editor for a national magazine, so i have picked up the disturbing habit of noticing this sort of thing. i am happy to review your copy if you would like. Just let me know. i seem to have a problem with my profile/account access on this site. If you want to contact me, you can message me on bdsmlr.com. You will likely have to join that site, but it is completely free, and I suspect the kind of site you might enjoy.
boi98229
1/4/21, 7:31 AM
Good start! I like the setup and the characters. Responding to pheromones strongly enough to go into trance and having wet dreams at least indicates that Joe is quickly developing strong attraction to Steve. Not sure yet if there is something more going on, or if Joe is just starting to respond subconsciously to the Steve's Dominance by feeling naturally submissive and aroused.
1/4/21, 6:34 AM
i would love to see more of this series, especially with more scat and monster stuff.
1/4/21, 2:54 AM
Hot. Looking forward for this to continue for many more chapters.
Anonymous
1/4/21, 2:34 AM
Every part had me leaking like a faucet, I hope we get to see more stories about Bobby's victims.
Anonymous
1/4/21, 2:18 AM
I loved it! I was hoping for even more permanent effects but it was still excellent.
Anonymous
1/4/21, 2:10 AM
Great story. Really intriguing...
Anonymous
1/4/21, 1:15 AM
extremely good stuff, both the bulk of the chapter and the set-up for whatever's next
nycboot
1/4/21, 12:54 AM
Once I caught on to the idea it totally reminded me of Mantan Mooreland's Incomplete Sentence routine: [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SDOQiy1XmBU](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SDOQiy1XmBU)
1/4/21, 12:18 AM
Found the conversion of the father by the son to be very hot. Enjoying this series.