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Anonymous
1/4/21, 1:15 AM
extremely good stuff, both the bulk of the chapter and the set-up for whatever's next
nycboot
1/4/21, 12:54 AM
Once I caught on to the idea it totally reminded me of Mantan Mooreland's Incomplete Sentence routine: [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SDOQiy1XmBU](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SDOQiy1XmBU)
1/4/21, 12:18 AM
Found the conversion of the father by the son to be very hot. Enjoying this series.
Jan 2, 2021
Anonymous
1/4/21, 12:17 AM
I liked it, thanks ! Shinsou is obviously my favourite character, so it's great to read some stories with him !
nycboot
1/3/21, 11:48 PM
Ha! Go ahead -torture the reader. :)
1/3/21, 11:29 PM
Woof! I was hard throughout Jame's time as a dog. The mountain spirit came across well. I enjoyed his narration and his sense of magick
1/3/21, 11:27 PM
The descriptions in this are really vivid, and you manage to pack a lot of characterization into very little space. Like Dace and Noam have said, the way you progress the changes is very elegant and awesome! Great work!
1/3/21, 11:21 PM
The only thing wrong with this story is that it hasn't continued yet. It has the potential to be a great continuation of "A Trial Through Hell," one of my all time favorite stories on this site.
1/3/21, 11:15 PM
I *loved* this - the gradual refinement of the satyr's reality warping, the rising lust in the vendor, the *sensory* nature of your descriptions! It's a masterpiece and I love it!
Lusty Stallion
1/3/21, 10:50 PM
Fuck man. Great job on a short story. Well written, described, really hot. Got me going. I'd love to see more of your stuff man. Thanks