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1/3/21, 11:21 PM
The only thing wrong with this story is that it hasn't continued yet. It has the potential to be a great continuation of "A Trial Through Hell," one of my all time favorite stories on this site.
1/3/21, 11:15 PM
I *loved* this - the gradual refinement of the satyr's reality warping, the rising lust in the vendor, the *sensory* nature of your descriptions! It's a masterpiece and I love it!
Lusty Stallion
1/3/21, 10:50 PM
Fuck man. Great job on a short story. Well written, described, really hot. Got me going. I'd love to see more of your stuff man. Thanks
1/3/21, 10:35 PM
i dont have a problem with making them leabians but many stories already did that. i guess this is why the story stand s out. it gets to explore themes other stories dodge in favor of erotica. i have no problem with those stories and i love most of them, but here is a unique opportunity to explore this themes of misogyny and homophobia and ask Questions like how society will move forward . its fascinating to me that it subverts thw usual tropes of making every one gay fixes society that usually happens in this stories. and i love me some gay utopia, but i am now starting to invest in the story itself.
1/3/21, 10:21 PM
I appreciate how evocative a setting you managed to create in such a short story, and how well you do that 'reality revises itself in iterations' thing to really get at what's happening and how the subject is being affected. Plus, the sexy bits were, well sexy :D Very nicely done, especially given the word count. You should post more stuff! And if you wanted to do an expanded version of this one to really drill into Thomas's experience with the satyr in more detail, well, I wouldn't say no :P
Anonymous
1/3/21, 10:05 PM
god damn this is AMAZING! Thank you so much for writting this!
Jan 3, 2021
1/3/21, 8:50 PM
This was hot as hell.
Dec 31, 2020
kuro
1/3/21, 8:18 PM
Dace - Thank you so much for taking my word salad of a prompt and making it into something steamingly hot! You've got a gift. The fact you parceled it up for me into a perfectly snug little story is the icing on the cake!
1/3/21, 6:56 PM
the only thing that would make Willie Cici's stories better would be to find a way to re-link the photos to them.
1/3/21, 6:16 PM
Thanks for letting me know - The Question is Does the Father know who his son is and likewise does the so know who his father is