Recent Comments

1/28/25, 5:46 AM
Really loving this story. Thank you, and please keep it up.
1/28/25, 4:02 AM
Liking this already.
1/28/25, 3:43 AM
Wish I could meet Amir 🥵
Anonymous
1/27/25, 10:53 AM
I love a slow build up as much as the next guy, but I really do feel like the story went nowhere this chapter. I can empathise with Percy’s frustration as the non-answers and repetitive nothings were definitely getting to me too.

1/28/25, 1:34 AM
@Anonymous I appreciate the honesty. Reading it back, I don't disagree. I think the next chapter will fix that, though.
1/28/25, 12:03 AM
This is the first time I've seen the dumb himbo jock as a top that I can think of! Nice twist!
1/27/25, 11:46 PM
Very hot story!
1/27/25, 4:07 AM
Well. This was actually about six chapters longer. And it wouldn’t fit. So I had to cut it somewhere it would at least make sense. Part V May end up not being the end. Since about 15% of this part is now in that part. I really tried to be less repetitive but. As my old creative writing teacher said. You write too much and repeat to much. Never learned unfortunately and that was almost twenty years ago. I hope this is enjoyed. Some big plot things. Rocky fighting back against Leviathan and just trying to be normal again. And Colt. While he doesn’t know the secrets yet. Just wait until he finds out.

1/27/25, 12:34 PM
@[thejazzcat](/user/show/10005285) What's that? You thought you were nearly done,...? You thought you could say everything and it would all round off nicely in just another chapter or so? _Ha ha ha!_ NO! It doesn't work like that! First you hit the word limit,... then 'one more chapter' becomes two,... _then three,...!_ _There is no end!_

1/27/25, 2:11 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) There really is no end. But if people like it. That’s ok.

1/27/25, 10:40 PM
@[thejazzcat](/user/show/10005285) Well, I really liked this chapter, so I could go for some more! This felt like a nice continuation that didn't outright invalidate the 'what if' you just gave us. Chase was a very nice addition (also, oof,.. :sob: ) Looking forward to more!

1/27/25, 11:18 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Thank you. Truly. I’ve said it before. But you are one of the reasons I wrote this. And hearing your comments makes me feel good about my writing. Seriously.
1/27/25, 10:51 PM
Nothing hotter than a young cop, in his uniform, taught to be a "good boy!"
1/27/25, 10:23 PM
Love all the comments so far and agree with them all. Princes are born to be humiliated!
1/27/25, 2:15 AM
Just finished checking this story out and I gotta say, it's really hot! The dirtiness of it all is a major turn on, and the raw way you write about the characters is real sexy. I especially love how you've portrayed Luca's heightened senses and the intense connection he has with the other guys. Makes the story exciting and the sexual encounters thrilling. Well, scorching in fact! The explicit details and the way you describe the characters' desires and actions is so hot, can't avoid getting turned on. I'm eager to see more action between the sixteen men - lots of potential for some steamy scenes, you're giving yourself room for variety and interesting dynamics and power plays. Overall, your writing is captivating. Don't be afraid to push the boundaries further - I'm all for it!