Recent Comments

1/3/21, 9:23 AM
Great story. If anyone need my address to do this to me please just reach out
1/3/21, 9:08 AM
This was the most impressed I've ever been reading smut. Why is there no 'poetry' tag on this?
1/3/21, 9:06 AM
A lot has been said on sexism in this setting, and i think that's interesting, but i also find it fascinating that this new society is also deeply homophobic, despite god being gay. All the formally straight men want to have sex with men, but they actively reject the already gay men who don't see Aaron as god. The club owner repeatedly uses slurs to refer to his gay employee. The main characters have Sex with each other and ignore social taboos, but it seems to be more of a religious act than love or even for pleasure. They still have the same social order they had previously with the same people, just different criteria. The juxtiposition of the sexism against the women, who do believe Aaron is god, and the homophobia against the gay men who don't is pretty fascinating, if hard to read (not a bad thing).
1/3/21, 9:04 AM
Hope there is another chapter. such a good story.
Jan 3, 2021
1/3/21, 8:55 AM
@hypnothrill coming from the master of slow builds that means alot
Jan 3, 2021
1/3/21, 8:15 AM
Really well done! I like the slow induction scenes.
Anonymous
1/3/21, 6:42 AM
No importa cuantas veces leea esta hisotria, nunca me canso. La forma en la que la desarollaste fue exelente y los eventos que ocurren son ingeniosos
1/3/21, 6:11 AM
always love seeing someone else who understands that Kurt is hot, and love how you use the sucker to mash him up with my other personal hottest X-Man, Colossus ;) Claremont would be so proud of these psychosexual shenanigans
1/3/21, 6:09 AM
Listen, I'm not saying that AMS should entirely remove the depiction of misogyny from the story. I'm just saying that, in this particular chapter, the balance was off, and the story was lingering on the depictions of women's suffering in a way that felt needlessly graphic to me, equivalent to that story in which a mind controller kills a dog just because he can. I was trying to add a "Misogyny" tag to this chapter, but then I found that the site doesn't have a "Misogyny" tag, and as a reader, I can't seem to add a new tag.
Jan 3, 2021
1/3/21, 5:14 AM
I loved the downward progression and manipulation. great job.