Recent Comments

1/3/21, 6:11 AM
always love seeing someone else who understands that Kurt is hot, and love how you use the sucker to mash him up with my other personal hottest X-Man, Colossus ;) Claremont would be so proud of these psychosexual shenanigans
1/3/21, 6:09 AM
Listen, I'm not saying that AMS should entirely remove the depiction of misogyny from the story. I'm just saying that, in this particular chapter, the balance was off, and the story was lingering on the depictions of women's suffering in a way that felt needlessly graphic to me, equivalent to that story in which a mind controller kills a dog just because he can. I was trying to add a "Misogyny" tag to this chapter, but then I found that the site doesn't have a "Misogyny" tag, and as a reader, I can't seem to add a new tag.
Jan 3, 2021
1/3/21, 5:14 AM
I loved the downward progression and manipulation. great job.
1/3/21, 5:11 AM
What an intriguing, well written beginning! I look forward to where you take the story next.
1/3/21, 4:30 AM
Thanks for the great feedback everyone.
1/3/21, 3:36 AM
Awesome ! I love it and hope there will be more stories similar to this one, or even continuing this one.
Jan 3, 2021
1/3/21, 3:06 AM
The brainwashing progress is awesome!
Gasuda
1/3/21, 3:02 AM
This is a truly bizarre story, but props to you - until it takes that turn, it's one of the hottest stories I've read on here. After it takes that turn, it becomes just *fascinating.*
1/3/21, 2:59 AM
You shouldn't have to explain anything, friend. Write YOUR story. A lot of really good stories here get inundated with requests and complaints, but you have to write YOUR story regardless of whatever anyone else says. I'm loving what you're doing. This is a world you are creating beautifully with world building descriptions that truly flesh it out more realistically. That's why there is an element of discomfort...I mean, y'all, imagine a world in which straight men suddenly are disgusted by, loose all interest in, and stop caring completely about women. What you're doing is not far fetched. If you truly enjoy full on mind control and shifting of core beliefs, desires, and personhood, this is insanely erotic. And, on top of it all, it would naturally be a cruel world for women...and, well, it's worth considering we currently live in one in which straight men that actually do want women treat them like shit constantly anyway. Don't read the negative comments. Just keep writing your amazing story.
1/3/21, 2:30 AM
Hi, the Original story is from me, postet as a "wiki" story 2017 ago - So everyone could write on the universe with me. the second part is already written, but only connected with the first part on the appearence of the Guard #0029 at the end. I would love if you post your addition to the storyline (like hypnothrill also did years ago) (the site hadn't the series feature back then)