Recent Comments

1/2/21, 11:31 PM
I'm so excited for chapter 4! Keep up the great work!
Anonymous
1/2/21, 11:27 PM
I wonder how long before he fully breaks?
Dec 31, 2020
1/2/21, 11:13 PM
What a joyous and lovely story! I hope we get to see what happens to them next!
Anonymous
1/2/21, 11:09 PM
This was great!!! Please do some hair growth.
1/2/21, 10:54 PM
I'm LOVING this story...seriously one of my faves already. I have faith that you're taking it where you want to go. Don't worry about what anyone says beyond how you want to tell your story. If you already have plans for what happens for the women in this new world, go with it. You're writing this story to fulfill your vision, no one elses. People have told me I've gone too far in many of my stories, but I write for me first and that makes for better storytelling. Merely because others wouldn't go as far as you with certain aspects, does NOT mean it's not a good place to take a story. Challenge them! Don't go off course of your vision merely due to a few differing opinions <3
1/2/21, 10:50 PM
I wonder if twins and Coach Hamilton got caught somewhere in the maze. I would love to hear about that!
Jul 6, 2020
Anonymous
1/2/21, 10:46 PM
The transformation was okay, but for me the story was missing all the details about the hypnosis/mind control process and any sense of Domination or submission. Like Brock the details of a chav look is pretty vague in my mind. Most of the transformation was purely visual or audio (his new accent), so full body photos, including the haircut, before and after the transformation would have added something.
Anonymous
1/2/21, 10:17 PM
Man, I'm anxiously awaiting for a new chapter of this. I check your page everyday. Please update! :)
1/2/21, 8:00 PM
Love it. So fucking weird and intense
Anonymous
1/2/21, 7:57 PM
really good read with a promising plot