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1/2/21, 3:07 PM
A very wonderful entrancement for the Romans and this reader. The poetic form was so unusual that it drew me right into the trance. Me thinks that I need to chastise my male organs in a chastity device today to begin the new year as a chase man without the ability to cream by seed. Thank you and I hope the tale of this epic poem will continue to entrance more Romans. I am entranced and will return here to reinforce my need for chastity.
1/2/21, 2:53 PM
This totally grew on me. Amazing story!
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1/2/21, 2:39 PM
This week on the masterson chronicles: Ethan continues to be a fucking delight This was SUCH a fun read... I'm not particularly into fisting or silicone/saline but you leaned into the sensory experience of it all and wrote about them in a way which made it *work,* even if it's outside my wheelhouse. I'm also starting to realize that my favorite thing about this series is how Ethan is kind of compelled to follow orders too, just because he's such a polite empty headed himbo? Mr. Cummer's fantasy of Ethan domming him would probably never come true, the kid's too much of a *sweetheart...* a ripped, sexy sweetheart. There were so many lines in this chapter that hit all my buttons, from hot to hilarious, as always. Also, you have a real knack for twist endings, or final moments that imply sexy times to come! As for my vote, I'd peeersonally lean towards baseball or burglars. I think both could be *very* fun and very hot, but for different reasons. Hard to choose between! On the one hand we haven't seen Ethan with another jock as his main focus for a bit, but on the other the role reversal and fun power dynamics of a burglary sounds *delightful...*
1/2/21, 2:36 PM
For the love of God, Montressor, what a great story!!!
1/2/21, 2:22 PM
Ethan is just the *perfect* vehicle for this weird combo of hot, hilarious, and adorable... I love this chapter and the ridiculous way it escalates. The sex is hot — fuck, even the way you describe *just Ethan* is hot — but I'm also just so impressed and charmed by the way you shaped this chapter! The only thing I didn't care for *at first* was the kind of on the nose description of "this is Ethan's power, this is what's happening" (which I understand came from people not really getting it last chapter), but then even that was made wonderful when you *repeated* it... I love a motif ;P and it added this layer of character and tongue in cheek personality to the narrator-voice that I found super fun. This chapter *at least* rivals the last one in terms of raw hotness, and I love where you're taking the story so far! Ethan is gonna stick in my head as a character for a long time...
1/2/21, 2:05 PM
I like the fact the dad was behind it. Please continue this and make it longer
Dec 31, 2020
1/2/21, 1:59 PM
the more of your stories I read the more of your craft *and* your personality shines through, and -- oh, wait, I should comment on the hot parts first hm. WELL. this was very hot... I loved the kind of lovingly detailed descriptions of the various reds and blacks, and the unexpected twists throughout the night -- it made things as simple as a drink order feel engaging and sexually tense~! anyway, your *craft...* dude this was so damn well done. you handled this with such a deft hand, and made each of the four sets of identically named characters feel so distinct. and Peter!! Peter was done *masterfully* imo, an engaging narrator despite not being involved in the specific antics of the story beyond as a waiter. really, really well done
1/2/21, 1:04 PM
This was nice, thanks for writing it.
1/2/21, 12:00 PM
again, I don't like how the women are being treated in the story, but I have a suggestion: why don't we see how the police station is now, after they were turned
1/2/21, 11:34 AM
Bravo! Many thanks for this episode in Markie's adventures.