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1/2/21, 1:04 PM
This was nice, thanks for writing it.
1/2/21, 12:00 PM
again, I don't like how the women are being treated in the story, but I have a suggestion: why don't we see how the police station is now, after they were turned
1/2/21, 11:34 AM
Bravo! Many thanks for this episode in Markie's adventures.
1/2/21, 11:15 AM
> once I finished, I kept the story going in my head with what I thought might happen next > That was my hope in plotting it this way. I think Ben's transformation in the reader's mind will be powerful and way better than my prose!
1/2/21, 11:13 AM
Thank you all for the comments! The fun I had writing this mystery-within-a-mystery really surprised me! (And it gave me the opportunity to read Poe again, so many prizes!) I have an idea for pt 4 that can serve as a finale for the entire series! Fret not.
Anonymous
1/2/21, 9:28 AM
fun sexy story that was a hot to read! this story is gonna be orgasm fuel for a good long while!
1/2/21, 7:59 AM
curious who the gentlemen is who happens to come by in the end
1/2/21, 7:55 AM
As always your stories are hot! I'm excited for the next chapter, I hope it wouldn't take a few months before we can read the next one.
AMS
1/2/21, 7:05 AM
It’s been really great to get all the positive feedback on this series. I’ve been a fan of this website for a while but had never tried writing erotica before. So it's been heartening to see authors I am big fans of enjoy it. Anyway, I wanted to say that it might be a little bit before I write the next chapter. I start a new job Monday so I expect to have a lot less free time to write for fun. I’ve outlined and plotted the rest of God is Gay and it should have around twelve chapters. So I hope those who have read this far will wait for the rest. Thanks!
Anonymous
1/2/21, 7:00 AM
WOW.. Can't wait! Just hope he's not pouring it down the drain? What a waste