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1/1/21, 6:30 AM
Fray no puede reprimir su excitacion mientras que su hermano sucumbe mas y mas. No puedo esperar al proximo capitulo!
Dec 31, 2020
1/1/21, 5:55 AM
An incredibly hot and romantic story! Love your stories, Dace.
1/1/21, 5:39 AM
Really hot!
Apr 24, 2018
1/1/21, 5:25 AM
holy crap! this is soooo hot, definitely needs a sequel >:)
1/1/21, 5:25 AM
*Noam*.... I have to agree with Time here, the worldbuilding is SO sharp and effortless — the little details you add range from hilarious to unsettling to just... rich. The things that count as swearing in this odd world, the combination of strict old world tradition with new technology, the merging of faith and technology... so incredibly fun to read! The progression with Santa was also just *hot*... I'm not usually into chastity but, reducing your main character to a horny, mumbling mess who can barely form words because he wants to get off so bad? The motif of the Xmas wishes, the idea of him taking all the sin in, the societal implications of even a system like this society needing people to take on the mantle of sinners or for all those impure thoughts to *go* somewhere? Ugh. Such a good read.
Anonymous
1/1/21, 4:40 AM
Part 3???
Dec 24, 2020
Lurker
1/1/21, 4:09 AM
I've never commented before, but I have to say this is well-written, has good characterization and a refreshing and heartwarming twist. It's sexy AND Christmas-y! Good job.
1/1/21, 3:47 AM
This story was hot AND funny! A great combination!
Anonymous
1/1/21, 3:32 AM
So Graham changed Aaron's morality. We know that everything else is in reference to the morality of the person. Aaron's morality was changed to I take what I want. But that idea runs counter to the concept of obedience. Why would Aaron listen or do what Colin wants if Aaron wants to beat Colin, have Graham for himself, and and save the other boys? Aaron takes what he wants and to take what he wants he must do what Colin doesn't want him to do. So the new pillar should allow him to resist the new bead of obedience. So what if Aaron is playing 4-D chess, he pretends that he has been beaten and conquered, so when Colin challenges him to a game of pool, so Colin can warp Aaron just like everyone, he flips the table on Colin. Colin thinks he already owns Aaron so he doesn't sink any of the balls that would cost Aaron the game, giving Aaron the chance to sink his version of the balls instead. He sinks the balls, changes Colin so Colin can't win, and then changes Colin again to make sure that not only does he stop messing with people, but he also undoes everything else that he does.
1/1/21, 3:08 AM
"Blowjobs had seemed easier when it had been his girlfriend doing it to him." This line ALONE makes the whole story! Fucking BRILLIANT. Blake's perspective is awesome. The way he transitions from a bi-curious essentially straight-boy into an ass-whore -- fucking HOT! The prospect of full cum-control -- Blake getting *caged* -- started to seep into my rhyme-addled brain at some stage. It didn't happen in *this* story, but you've opened the door... You asked which song we liked? All of them!! It's fucking HOT when Pup in Heat makes Blake go down to the floor and his back arches. The image is fucking HOT! It's near the start of Blake's being MindVoided, so a big step into his drone conversion. The mental image is really strong. But the workout song takes first prize for me. It's is like a CrossFit WOD cross-bred with a wet dream. I really, really like that song.