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1/1/21, 3:47 AM
This story was hot AND funny! A great combination!
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1/1/21, 3:32 AM
So Graham changed Aaron's morality. We know that everything else is in reference to the morality of the person. Aaron's morality was changed to I take what I want. But that idea runs counter to the concept of obedience. Why would Aaron listen or do what Colin wants if Aaron wants to beat Colin, have Graham for himself, and and save the other boys? Aaron takes what he wants and to take what he wants he must do what Colin doesn't want him to do. So the new pillar should allow him to resist the new bead of obedience. So what if Aaron is playing 4-D chess, he pretends that he has been beaten and conquered, so when Colin challenges him to a game of pool, so Colin can warp Aaron just like everyone, he flips the table on Colin. Colin thinks he already owns Aaron so he doesn't sink any of the balls that would cost Aaron the game, giving Aaron the chance to sink his version of the balls instead. He sinks the balls, changes Colin so Colin can't win, and then changes Colin again to make sure that not only does he stop messing with people, but he also undoes everything else that he does.
1/1/21, 3:08 AM
"Blowjobs had seemed easier when it had been his girlfriend doing it to him." This line ALONE makes the whole story! Fucking BRILLIANT. Blake's perspective is awesome. The way he transitions from a bi-curious essentially straight-boy into an ass-whore -- fucking HOT! The prospect of full cum-control -- Blake getting *caged* -- started to seep into my rhyme-addled brain at some stage. It didn't happen in *this* story, but you've opened the door... You asked which song we liked? All of them!! It's fucking HOT when Pup in Heat makes Blake go down to the floor and his back arches. The image is fucking HOT! It's near the start of Blake's being MindVoided, so a big step into his drone conversion. The mental image is really strong. But the workout song takes first prize for me. It's is like a CrossFit WOD cross-bred with a wet dream. I really, really like that song.
1/1/21, 3:03 AM
You need to do the Rock or John Cena
Dec 31, 2020
1/1/21, 3:00 AM
*This story is so damn cute...* Your characters are lovable as *hell,* Dace, and the setting felt so vivid and cozy and festive! Adorable and deeply, *achingly* merry and jolly, as a holiday story should be. The sex scene was also just... *ugh.* Very good... I'm a sucker for size in erotica and you really pulled it off amazingly.
Dec 31, 2020
1/1/21, 2:57 AM
Ahhhhh I love this story... once again you just have such a knack for worldbuilding in subtle little ways, like all the allusions to Vulcan/Hephaestus peppered throughout and the way the protag felt like he had a whole history building up to this point in his character. The sex was hot, you interpreted the prompt in a super fascinating way, and the characters were lovable and had such a fun dynamic. Great read!
1/1/21, 2:53 AM
I adore this story, it falls into that category of "perfect cocktail of hot and almost silly/tongue in cheek" which you do so well... the cyclical aspect just kept getting hotter but was also kind of hilarious. The characters were also really well done, especially for such a short story! You did a *lovely* job with this prompt, as always.
1/1/21, 2:12 AM
Hey, abracadabra923! This is awesome. Among a bunch of incredibly hot things you did here, Camden's diminishing self-possession is my personal favorite. His obliviousness to what the MindVoiderz are doing to him, and his emergence at the end as a brain-drained Voider-boy is incredibly hot, too. Personally, I've never gotten even a bit of enjoyment out of clubbing or concert-going of the sort the scene in your story is fashioned after. Yet -- and this further demonstrates what a command you have over this concept and art form -- I couldn't stop reading and couldn't stop getting into how cool it would be to be there with Camden and his fellow drones-in-the making. Thank you for this amazing story!
1/1/21, 1:22 AM
Especially liked the idea of U47 figuring things out, and the fact that the toys had a sort of a life of their own for four out of twenty-four hours.
1/1/21, 12:34 AM
Sure wish there were more chapters of game night fun 😏