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1/1/21, 3:03 AM
You need to do the Rock or John Cena
Dec 31, 2020
1/1/21, 3:00 AM
*This story is so damn cute...* Your characters are lovable as *hell,* Dace, and the setting felt so vivid and cozy and festive! Adorable and deeply, *achingly* merry and jolly, as a holiday story should be. The sex scene was also just... *ugh.* Very good... I'm a sucker for size in erotica and you really pulled it off amazingly.
Dec 31, 2020
1/1/21, 2:57 AM
Ahhhhh I love this story... once again you just have such a knack for worldbuilding in subtle little ways, like all the allusions to Vulcan/Hephaestus peppered throughout and the way the protag felt like he had a whole history building up to this point in his character. The sex was hot, you interpreted the prompt in a super fascinating way, and the characters were lovable and had such a fun dynamic. Great read!
1/1/21, 2:53 AM
I adore this story, it falls into that category of "perfect cocktail of hot and almost silly/tongue in cheek" which you do so well... the cyclical aspect just kept getting hotter but was also kind of hilarious. The characters were also really well done, especially for such a short story! You did a *lovely* job with this prompt, as always.
1/1/21, 2:12 AM
Hey, abracadabra923! This is awesome. Among a bunch of incredibly hot things you did here, Camden's diminishing self-possession is my personal favorite. His obliviousness to what the MindVoiderz are doing to him, and his emergence at the end as a brain-drained Voider-boy is incredibly hot, too. Personally, I've never gotten even a bit of enjoyment out of clubbing or concert-going of the sort the scene in your story is fashioned after. Yet -- and this further demonstrates what a command you have over this concept and art form -- I couldn't stop reading and couldn't stop getting into how cool it would be to be there with Camden and his fellow drones-in-the making. Thank you for this amazing story!
1/1/21, 1:22 AM
Especially liked the idea of U47 figuring things out, and the fact that the toys had a sort of a life of their own for four out of twenty-four hours.
1/1/21, 12:34 AM
Sure wish there were more chapters of game night fun 😏
12/31/20, 11:32 PM
This series ended up chock full of sexy transformations...not sure which is my favorite! Well done.
12/31/20, 11:28 PM
One man's cult is another man's religion: that's the heart of this story. For the only thing that is non-normative is that the religion is centered around men and their sexual nature. But the change that occurs over the story is positive and enjoyable. And when it closes with Detective John bringing others in the brotherhood it feels good to see it. You've written a very enjoyable and positive story. I look forward to seeing what else you produce.