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12/31/20, 11:28 PM
One man's cult is another man's religion: that's the heart of this story. For the only thing that is non-normative is that the religion is centered around men and their sexual nature. But the change that occurs over the story is positive and enjoyable. And when it closes with Detective John bringing others in the brotherhood it feels good to see it. You've written a very enjoyable and positive story. I look forward to seeing what else you produce.
Anonymous
12/31/20, 11:24 PM
can we get logan and scott in here too?
12/31/20, 10:43 PM
Great story, nicely written and well-paced. Enjoyed the moment when John realises he has been tricked and then decides to go along with things anyway. Is there going to be another chapter perhaps involving the fellow officer from the gym, wealthy investor and lawyer?
12/31/20, 10:35 PM
Thanks Dude :)
12/31/20, 10:34 PM
Awesome story! :D I love Mojo and his twisted parody of reality television. :p You do a great job capturing the tone of the character, too! Can't wait to see what happens when Nightcrawler eats the other sweets...
Dec 31, 2020
12/31/20, 10:33 PM
Now that was an original story and told so perfectly through the eyes of a seasoned barkeep! Wonderful!
12/31/20, 10:13 PM
I liked this character-study very much, sex scene or not.
12/31/20, 9:54 PM
Very hot story! But I wanted to know more about what happened to Darren. We get such a tight focus on the relationship between John and the Leader that we don't get to see the rest of the cult very much.
4luvofurbottom
12/31/20, 9:21 PM
Yes! I'm do happy this series is continuing. i love your writing, love the descriptions and inner focus of changes. But i especially love that you focus on changing a guy into a hot thicc otter. Can't wait til the narrator realizes his dick is useless.