Recent Comments

12/31/20, 10:43 PM
Great story, nicely written and well-paced. Enjoyed the moment when John realises he has been tricked and then decides to go along with things anyway. Is there going to be another chapter perhaps involving the fellow officer from the gym, wealthy investor and lawyer?
12/31/20, 10:35 PM
Thanks Dude :)
12/31/20, 10:34 PM
Awesome story! :D I love Mojo and his twisted parody of reality television. :p You do a great job capturing the tone of the character, too! Can't wait to see what happens when Nightcrawler eats the other sweets...
Dec 31, 2020
12/31/20, 10:33 PM
Now that was an original story and told so perfectly through the eyes of a seasoned barkeep! Wonderful!
12/31/20, 10:13 PM
I liked this character-study very much, sex scene or not.
12/31/20, 9:54 PM
Very hot story! But I wanted to know more about what happened to Darren. We get such a tight focus on the relationship between John and the Leader that we don't get to see the rest of the cult very much.
4luvofurbottom
12/31/20, 9:21 PM
Yes! I'm do happy this series is continuing. i love your writing, love the descriptions and inner focus of changes. But i especially love that you focus on changing a guy into a hot thicc otter. Can't wait til the narrator realizes his dick is useless.
12/31/20, 8:18 PM
is Gearfetish.com still a thing?
Dec 31, 2020
Anonymous
12/31/20, 7:36 PM
excellent work!!
Anonymous
12/31/20, 7:35 PM
[@Hypnothrill](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/37386) - If I wrote a sequel, I don't think that's the direction I'd take it. Thought I'll admit, I did almost have the story end with another knock on the door and a giftwrapped gumball machine waiting for the himbos. So far as Ben goes, I thought he'd end up differently too, but he jumped right off the page while I was writing him, so this is who he is. [@Plymouth58](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/1353762) - Thanks man! To be honest, I don't really like Ben as a person either, but I think it's a better story with him there. He's the foil to Mark and Kenny. I meant to write him as more of a fun daddy type, but sometimes a character tells me who they are and I just have to go with it. [@Island Jock](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/918465) - That'd be totally sick, right? But, so far as I know, nobody has invented it yet. You'll just have to do the same thing I do - listen to your cock and do whatever it wants. @Wow - Thanks bro! I've been doing a lot of more experimental stuff this year, and I decided to end it off by returning to my roots and writing a good ol' himbo story. [@welan](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/114561) - Super glad to hear that. I was trying to keep it shorter, but the sex scenes just kept coming. Stoked to hear it wasn't too long. [@TexMuscle](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/10002223) - Thanks man. I dunno about his IQ, but there's definitely something that happens to cement the personality change when a new himbo swallows the gum. A good himbo loves to swallow after all. @anon - Thanks bro! :)