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1/9/25, 7:24 AM
Sensational

1/27/25, 9:18 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thanks so much. There may be even more musk in future.
1/9/25, 7:18 AM
What a great story! Can’t wait to see which new training methods Iago will come up with next ;)

1/27/25, 9:17 PM
@[Elmara](/user/show/910352) Thank you! I'm sure he has some other unorthodox techniques...
1/27/25, 9:12 PM
Loved this chapter (and all of the story so far). Really like how you're giving Tyson some thoughts of rebellion or discomfort with his choice. I think it adds a whole lot to the story and really emphasizes the differences between him and Drone 232. Keep up the great work!
1/24/25, 11:50 PM
Is the cock shrink permanent? Just curious.

1/25/25, 4:38 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Yes

1/26/25, 7:40 PM
@[Aramane](/user/show/10041848) I think Coach needs to be forced to wear a cursed speedo.

1/27/25, 2:05 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) I had basically written the epilogue ending for this the moment I came up with the idea. But in the middle of writing I had considered the mob turning on Coach...

1/27/25, 9:30 AM
@[Aramane](/user/show/10041848) Heh, that's kinda what I was thinking is that there's totally no way that this might backfire and the now bottom boys will have a desire to show Coach just how great it is to be like them. Kinda a shame that the shrinking is permanent though, It would be hot to see it reverse after they left college but they remain bottoms or still prefer bottoming haha.

1/27/25, 11:02 AM
@[TaylorGuy](/user/show/10000710) Because I personally like stories where the cock shrinking is permanent, that's all I write. My brain sees non-permamnent shrinkage as low stakes and therefore, nowhere near as hot.

1/27/25, 7:03 PM
@[Aramane](/user/show/10041848) I think coach needs a special voodoo speedo that make his ass expand into a massive bubblebutt as well. He will be an ultra bottom.

1/27/25, 7:05 PM
@[Aramane](/user/show/10041848) Well as new bottoms it's not like they'll need their tiny cocks to make babies or anything.
1/27/25, 4:48 PM
Good to see pancakes used by someone else! A fun food. Looking forward to seeing where it goes.
1/27/25, 5:25 AM
Yeah, I knew there was some connection between Colt and Leviathan! But wow, this is bad, this is really bad. Leviathan was obsessed with Colt's father, but after getting dumped he lost his mind and killed Colt's father and mother and left only Colt alive to torment him as a way of getting revenge on his father. All this time Leviathan's real target wasn't Rocky, but Colt. Rocky was just another tool in his grand scheme to break Colt once and for all. But it's still weird. What would Leviathan do if he were victorious and managed to make Colt break? (Thank god that won't happen. Thank goodness for making the author like happy endings so much!) From what I could gather from the conversation between Leviathan and Chase, besides Leviathan's desire to emotionally torture Colt, he, in a very twisted way, also wants him? If he just saw him as a punching bag to take out all the frustration of Harold's rejection on, he wouldn't see him as someone special, so special that not even Chase, a hero with powers, can compare in his eyes, and also for him to go to all this trouble, when he could simply use his brainwashing powers and literally mold Colt into whatever he wants him to be, but, as he said, he doesn't want Colt to be just another useless slave. Leviathan is such a complex character. I love it! We don't get to know his ultimate goal, just little pieces of the puzzle. I'm truly impressed.

1/27/25, 3:48 PM
@[Gatuno](/user/show/10021894) Just wait til Colt finds out. It was too long or you already would have! It’s going to open up a lot of issues that colt thought he’d already dealt with.
1/27/25, 3:46 PM
Man. Poor Tyson. Bring him back just to take his friends. Cold. But your description of his personality being brought back and how confused he feels is amazing. Well done! The part where he realizes it says “current personality” as Tyler hurts a little as it seems like they can just make him whatever they need him to be. Life of a drone I guess! Particularly later on when he does not think of himself as Tyler but as the drone. Good stuff.
mistermister
1/27/25, 2:55 PM
i cannot wait for the next chapter of this. i am literally cum-ing back once a week to check ;)
1/27/25, 4:50 AM
My roommate is a homophobe and Trump supporter and needs to be taken down.

1/27/25, 1:59 PM
@[Jesus](/user/show/51506) Wow, that’s quite a challenge! Even Alexo might short-circuit trying to handle that one. Wishing you the best of luck.
1/27/25, 1:45 PM
This has been a great journey.