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1/27/25, 5:25 AM
Yeah, I knew there was some connection between Colt and Leviathan! But wow, this is bad, this is really bad. Leviathan was obsessed with Colt's father, but after getting dumped he lost his mind and killed Colt's father and mother and left only Colt alive to torment him as a way of getting revenge on his father. All this time Leviathan's real target wasn't Rocky, but Colt. Rocky was just another tool in his grand scheme to break Colt once and for all. But it's still weird. What would Leviathan do if he were victorious and managed to make Colt break? (Thank god that won't happen. Thank goodness for making the author like happy endings so much!) From what I could gather from the conversation between Leviathan and Chase, besides Leviathan's desire to emotionally torture Colt, he, in a very twisted way, also wants him? If he just saw him as a punching bag to take out all the frustration of Harold's rejection on, he wouldn't see him as someone special, so special that not even Chase, a hero with powers, can compare in his eyes, and also for him to go to all this trouble, when he could simply use his brainwashing powers and literally mold Colt into whatever he wants him to be, but, as he said, he doesn't want Colt to be just another useless slave. Leviathan is such a complex character. I love it! We don't get to know his ultimate goal, just little pieces of the puzzle. I'm truly impressed.

1/27/25, 3:48 PM
@[Gatuno](/user/show/10021894) Just wait til Colt finds out. It was too long or you already would have! It’s going to open up a lot of issues that colt thought he’d already dealt with.
1/27/25, 3:46 PM
Man. Poor Tyson. Bring him back just to take his friends. Cold. But your description of his personality being brought back and how confused he feels is amazing. Well done! The part where he realizes it says “current personality” as Tyler hurts a little as it seems like they can just make him whatever they need him to be. Life of a drone I guess! Particularly later on when he does not think of himself as Tyler but as the drone. Good stuff.
mistermister
1/27/25, 2:55 PM
i cannot wait for the next chapter of this. i am literally cum-ing back once a week to check ;)
1/27/25, 4:50 AM
My roommate is a homophobe and Trump supporter and needs to be taken down.

1/27/25, 1:59 PM
@[Jesus](/user/show/51506) Wow, that’s quite a challenge! Even Alexo might short-circuit trying to handle that one. Wishing you the best of luck.
1/27/25, 1:45 PM
This has been a great journey.
1/27/25, 11:52 AM
This was great. The twist is paced perfectly and arrives just the right time.
1/27/25, 11:04 AM
This is so hot 🔥 I need more!
1/27/25, 6:31 AM
I was worried that when you said you've split it into 2, that it'd be another week before we get to the climax, but turns out we only had to wait a couple of days. Can't wait to see what you work on next. Any chance you're returning to some of your older stuff? (I don't want to specify the one I'm holding out for, just so that it won't pressure you if you're not currently inspired).
Jan 24, 2025
1/27/25, 6:24 AM
Wow just wow 👌
1/27/25, 3:40 AM
So hot, the story keeps getting better and better!