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12/31/20, 4:44 AM
great story
Anonymous
12/31/20, 3:54 AM
*Sizzling hot hot hot!* i really would love to test this hypnotist's control. i would love to test Jake and Carlos sexual skills in a spit roast. i would love to feel what it is like to be someone's puppet, to be subject to that level of control. Your hypnosis session with John Phillips seems really well scripted. i am not a hypnotist and in no way any kind of expert in hypnosis, but have spent hours in hypnosis as a subject. It truly is something extremely pleasurable! This chapter was difficult to read because i kept zoning out on the script, the scene, and sensing John Phillip's mental state -- blank mind other than his sharp focus on the hypnotist's words and his pleasurably aroused state.
12/31/20, 3:37 AM
Can't wait to see these applications roll in!
12/31/20, 3:33 AM
As others have said, this is an excellently written story with an intriguing concept. I really enjoyed reading it.
Anonymous
12/31/20, 3:14 AM
I have a target, Dominic Dimico in Jacksonville, FL.
Dec 29, 2020
jamiemboy
12/31/20, 1:58 AM
Woof! cute and hot story... really hope to see more of this :)
12/31/20, 1:42 AM
Wonderful story! Looking forward to the next chapters.
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
12/31/20, 1:23 AM
I wish somebody would take me under like that & more!
12/31/20, 12:42 AM
Really fun concept, and rendered beautifully with your command of language. Also the tf and the sex were hot :P You did great with this little trio of stories. Thank you for posting, and well done!
12/31/20, 12:40 AM
"Frankly, you look ridiculous. So we will ridicule you." "Diplomatic ties established." "You can do anything that I set your mind to, love." You had some really nice turns of dialogue in this piece, the sex scene was smolderingly hot, and the ending was the absolute perfect kicker to ground it in sweetness and give it a real personal touch. Very well done!