Recent Comments

Jason
12/29/20, 8:50 PM
This is such a great story! Please make a continuation.
12/29/20, 8:38 PM
@Josh Slater Thanks man! I wont cry copying if you still use the autopolishing in one of your stories. The more people suffering knob polishing the better! haha. Good point about Aj & Dj. Definetly a missed opportunity. Love the soccer socks idea and now wish I had described it that way! Thanks for the comment!
12/29/20, 8:26 PM
@boy Jason - Me? Hide little easter eggs? Never! (Thank you for catching that little joke of mine. I think you're the first person to notice it!)
boy Jason
12/29/20, 8:19 PM
I just reread this story, and the first few times, I didn't notice what seemed like a subtle easter egg reference to a certain website that preceded this one: “The Neuratron Configurable Multipurpose Chip" later abbreviated to "The ***NCM C***hip". (Bolding and Italics added by me) Was this intentional?
Dec 29, 2020
12/29/20, 7:58 PM
Thank you for the feedback everyone. It was a little rushed as I wanted to run with the idea as soon as I got it so I wouldn't forget. I may edit to make it feel more complete.
Dec 29, 2020
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12/29/20, 7:42 PM
Damn! Been far too long since I was tranced as a dog! Hope this continues
12/29/20, 7:41 PM
The dumbing down and the humiliation were my favorite elements on this story, especially on the first three chapters. Very good and hot indeed! I agree with Tom Gungy, your writing skills are GREAT. That said, I'm a bit sad for Caleb losing his passion for drawing, but it's a personal preference. I love the story.
12/29/20, 7:37 PM
@fanboi214 and @GlamGod I'm glad you like Chuy and Ty, guys! I had some doubts about how the romantic elements would work on a mind control story; it's great to know you're enjoying with both thugs!
Anonymous
12/29/20, 5:41 PM
wow, I like it. Please continue!!!
12/29/20, 5:21 PM
Many nice details in this story. I was tempted to use the autopolishing knob immediately in one of my stories. Just wish we could have spent some more time to see where Aj and Dj went. Perhaps some more functional clothes like soccer socks would have made it more obvious.