Recent Comments

Dec 29, 2020
12/29/20, 7:58 PM
Thank you for the feedback everyone. It was a little rushed as I wanted to run with the idea as soon as I got it so I wouldn't forget. I may edit to make it feel more complete.
Dec 29, 2020
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
12/29/20, 7:42 PM
Damn! Been far too long since I was tranced as a dog! Hope this continues
12/29/20, 7:41 PM
The dumbing down and the humiliation were my favorite elements on this story, especially on the first three chapters. Very good and hot indeed! I agree with Tom Gungy, your writing skills are GREAT. That said, I'm a bit sad for Caleb losing his passion for drawing, but it's a personal preference. I love the story.
12/29/20, 7:37 PM
@fanboi214 and @GlamGod I'm glad you like Chuy and Ty, guys! I had some doubts about how the romantic elements would work on a mind control story; it's great to know you're enjoying with both thugs!
Anonymous
12/29/20, 5:41 PM
wow, I like it. Please continue!!!
12/29/20, 5:21 PM
Many nice details in this story. I was tempted to use the autopolishing knob immediately in one of my stories. Just wish we could have spent some more time to see where Aj and Dj went. Perhaps some more functional clothes like soccer socks would have made it more obvious.
12/29/20, 5:18 PM
This is undoubtedly one of the best, if not the most, executed erotica stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading.. The themes of innocent naivete and socially-integrated perversion were perfectly captured, and I can't wait to see what you write going forward from here. You possess an amazing amount of talent.
12/29/20, 5:15 PM
Me intrigo como construiste la historia hasta el fin con los hemarnos encantados. Buen trabajo; esta es la primera historia en espanol que lei en este sitio y me encanto.
Dec 29, 2020
12/29/20, 5:14 PM
Hot! I've been wanting to write a story along this line with a magic puppy butt-plug that programs the user. I just didn't know what else to do with it!
Dec 24, 2020
12/29/20, 5:14 PM
What a sweet story. I loved it.