Recent Comments

12/29/20, 1:14 PM
Wow! That was one hot chapter! Eagerly awaiting more.
12/29/20, 1:12 PM
And the plot thickens! I love that we have a few guys who seem to be totally immune to whatever's happening--it makes the world-change story all that hotter.
Jaosn
12/29/20, 12:52 PM
Thank you for continuing - It is an awesome story, the continuation was definitely necessary.
Dec 29, 2020
12/29/20, 12:41 PM
I really enjoyed this. Hoping for a second part where we see the two men get used
Dec 29, 2020
Anonymous
12/29/20, 12:30 PM
great idea...well done !!!
Dec 29, 2020
12/29/20, 12:29 PM
It's not a bad story, but it does feel incredibly rushed. Although the narrator tells us some details about the two guys, we never really get to know them, because we never see them interact, and we don't get any dialogue that might indicate how they've changed mentally after their stint in the brainwashing capsules.
12/29/20, 10:31 AM
great story. excited for the next chapters
12/29/20, 8:58 AM
I do feel bad for Gemma, I hope the women don't end up alone
boi98229
12/29/20, 8:42 AM
Good story! Thanks for sharing.
12/29/20, 8:33 AM
@boi98229 hey ! thanks ! it was an old story. i am working on another puppy story at the moment !