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Jan 24, 2025
1/27/25, 6:24 AM
Wow just wow 👌
1/27/25, 3:40 AM
So hot, the story keeps getting better and better!
1/25/25, 5:41 PM
Hot AF my man, you're killing it!

1/27/25, 2:43 AM
@[Jack Parker](/user/show/10016753) Thanks Jack :)
1/25/25, 12:16 PM
Watch as Colton turns him into his bitch and handles him

1/27/25, 2:42 AM
@[Maxigay](/user/show/524184) Colton is certainly enjoying getting to order around Ben for a change.
1/25/25, 4:01 AM
The birth of a cumdump. Fucking hot story man. Definitely want to see how far you take Ben down the rabbit hole. 🍆💦💦

1/27/25, 2:42 AM
@[John Rogers](/user/show/10022487) Thanks man. Glad you're enjoying it.
2/20/24, 3:40 AM
Wonderful story. It's in my favorites list now.

Welan
1/27/25, 2:13 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Thank I am working with TItus now for something similar

1/27/25, 2:25 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Glad you liked it. I have 3 more stories mostly done but haven't the time or partner to finish them at the moment.
1/26/25, 4:45 PM
Great story! I love how this is paced, so that we start with the sweeter depiction of the narrator's relationship with his partner but gradually get much darker details about how he bagged his man and how they're working to serve their Master. It almost feels like it's in the same universe as Spiralfun's "The Spell's Call" and my own "New in Town."

1/27/25, 1:13 AM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Thanks a lot! Those stories are definitely big inspirations for this one. I loved the switch from free to bound and the sudden shift in no time and wanted to explore what it would look like being in a town where people expected it each day.
1/27/25, 12:38 AM
The story was fine, and I'm glad there's more Cycle One stuff, but it felt kind of rushed. I don't know if the format of a chat log just didn't give enough space between major plot points but the allure of the drink was so sudden, there wasn't room for build up. I've also dabbled with Toolbaz a bit, and the word limit means there's just not a ton of room to get that level of detail and desciption. It's a bit of a bummer. I'm not gonna say it's good or bad to use AI to help write or to write for you, but I think these stories could be a good platform to begin with as a sort of overview and go through and add your own voice to it. As it stands, in a vacuum the story is pretty good. I'm used to more from your stories, but if you can't write a story right now, maybe this is good enough?
1/27/25, 12:36 AM
With how you built Gabe up, how can I not enjoy him? Still hoping Timothy will surprise us.
1/6/25, 4:21 AM
Best of luck ice skating. If it is as good as Raz's swimming, I wouldn't mind taking a look at your abs later. I love how you keep us in suspense. With little hints from Gabe, Simon, and Jose.

1/6/25, 4:23 AM
@[astrologus](/user/show/1037572) Other things I loved from this chapter: how you described Timothy as androgenous (could be why he wants to be called Timothy). And how you explicitly said the cage was changing Raz.

1/27/25, 12:25 AM
@[astrologus](/user/show/1037572) Who is favourite?