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boi98229
12/28/20, 5:34 AM
Thanks again for a really hot story! No time to say more. i'm off to read more of your stories! ~david
Anonymous
12/28/20, 5:02 AM
One of the hottest hypnosis stories i've read! Thank you so much! Of course hypnosis, TPE, loss of control are all key fetishes for me. And including a threesome which represented a male hierarchy was that much more arousing! Over-riding all of this though was how real you made it all seem. The additional wrinkle throughout is the first person narrative by an unknown person who seems to be a stalker. This aspect of the story adds a vague level of mystery and tension to the story. i am very much looking forward to reading that part. In the meantime though, like New Guy In Town i am really enjoying the initial threesome, so i am hoping you plan to encourage us readers to fall thoroughly in love with the current characters before moving onto that phase of the story. Thanks again! ~david
12/28/20, 4:40 AM
Oooooh this premise is really really interesting and so far I think you've pulled it off really well! Oblivious-controller mass hypnosis (or whatever you want to call it) is *fun* and I haven't come across it before. I like a lot of the specifics you've done so far and the way you've shifted perspective. I'm really curious to see where you go from here! It feels like you've pooossibly set up a bit of a mystery as to how and why this is all happening and it'll be cool to see it unfold if you go that route. I'm also curious to see how you handle the massive throng of people outside if you continue, and how Aaron's character will change as he starts to realize what's happening. Great to see a new writer around, and great first story to post here!!
12/28/20, 4:26 AM
i like this. the thing that get me is the mentality change of everyone in this story.
Anonymous
12/28/20, 4:04 AM
I read the story, I don't think there is anything wrong with it. it met the mark with mind control, they are still attracted to each other, and no one got hurt. I'm a transwoman who enjoys this site very much. I don't think there is nearly enough fem stories on here, then again I don't think transpeople get enough representation anywhere, but you don't see me complaining in the comments...I just skip the ones with tags I'm not into.
12/28/20, 3:02 AM
You know it occurs to me like it did most that a site call Gay Spiral Stories might include perhaps all of the gay community and not just some of them? Like for example, bisexual men? I didn't even read this story because it was marked clearly and I knew it wasn't for me, so there is little reason why anyone else can't do the same. This site is pretty simple to navigate and explore. You can even narrow down your searches to things you want to read. Support what you want to support and don't add to the offended fire like the rest of the sheep in the world. We all have a brain that we can use, so I encourage you to use yours to not read stories that you aren't interested in or even comment on them to shame the author.
12/28/20, 2:21 AM
Hi, just want to state that this very much is not intended to be a gay to straight story. Bi men exist. Bi men read this website. Bi men enjoy mind control and transformation erotica. I do not condone conversion therapy. I've had a hypnotist attempt to erase my bisexuality in the past (by trying to make me believe I was fully homosexual.) It was not fun. Thanks to those that commented :)
Evan
12/28/20, 2:19 AM
Excited by a new chapter. And what a chapter! Masterpiece. Poor Aaron. He just wanted to help.
12/28/20, 1:41 AM
Can we please get past this ridiculous specificity about the name of the site, and the content allowed? It was approved by an admin, it was allowed, there is a tag specifically for "gay to bi" and "gay to straight" if it wasn't allowed, those tags wouldn't exist here. The story description, tags, and a blatant warning at the top of the post CLEARLY mark it. If you don't like stories like this, don't read. Click on something else. Don't come to the comments bitching. You were adequately warned. I bet there are plenty of us who don't like some of the fetishes allowed on the site, you don't see us storming the comments trying to guilt/shame them away. Don't be that guy. Now, as for the story: I liked it, it's very intriguing, maybe a little rushed in parts, but hey, it got the job done! Great work! Keep it up!
Anonymous
12/28/20, 1:15 AM
The description and tags did make the subject matter of this story fairly obvious. I realize for some people it can be disconcerting, even upsetting, to read these types of stories, so I think it's fair to ask that they're tagged appropriately so readers know what to expect. If they are, like this one was, then I see no problem with it at all.