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giveintothemusk
12/28/20, 8:18 AM
Poor Aaron 🥺 The concept of that table is truly so sexy though. Great story.
Jason
12/28/20, 8:14 AM
This is such an amazing story! Wright more chapters, this can be continued in such an amazing way.
Martin
12/28/20, 7:16 AM
Thank you all that this discussion has remained this civil and calm. I really appreciate this! I understand where those people who feel uncomfortable with the idea of gay-to-straight/bi conversion are coming from, in the light of what happened in the past. But, as others have already written, considering how many stories here are straight-to-gay, this is really a bit hypocritical, though I totally get it, why you weigh this differently. Anyway, just to clarify, as long as a story clearly has some focus on men and gay sex, I don't mind if it contains other things, including straight sex and also a gay-to-straight theme. After all, there are people on this site who like to read about straight sex, too, and diversity is something we should all embrace, if not us, who else would. A line I'll not allow to be crossed would be a story that promotes gay-to-straight as a positive thing, especially to "cure" homosexuals. It's a delicate line, and if I should miss any hint in that direction, please inform me, so I can look into it.
12/28/20, 7:15 AM
Imagine being pissed because only 99.95% of a site is about your fetish
Martin
12/28/20, 7:03 AM
@hairyartist & Zac: Thank you so much for your nice comments! I really appreciate them, and to know I've made you hard and leaking is the best reward I could get! @Mind Labyrinth: Thank you once again for going through the story and fixing all my mistakes. You're an amazing person! I'm really glad to have you around. And thank you for that comment, too. Some of your points certainly have to be looked upon in follow-up chapters. I understand that this first chapter is quite long and probably because of that, it hasn't got that many hits, yet, as usual for long stories. But those who've read it seemed to be happy enough. Nothing would make me happier than the knowledge it gave you pleasure and maybe even made you cum! So please don't forget to leave your comments!
12/28/20, 5:43 AM
this is so hot ! please do more chapters. It's so unique and there are lots of possibilities. thanks for writing
12/28/20, 5:36 AM
THIS. Is Glorious. Devin is the most pitiful of tragic protagonists at the opening, and you really do feel for him and the desperation of his situation. Mr. Masterson is CLEARLY fairly shady and personally i would NEVER have agreed to ANYTHING without a defined contract. 'minimum this much pay per hour, these amenities and housing concerns covered, a defined cost of $$$ to be paid off at which point, there is no financial obligation, no lasting alterations... etc' but it makes perfect sense that this poor young man wouldn't think of these things. He'd clearly been well provided for before being kicked out, and so he ended up exactly where his father alluded he might. all in all this is an excellent result to a fascinating conversation in the discord, i applaud your creativity on this, it was truly a fun and thoughtful read.
boi98229
12/28/20, 5:34 AM
Thanks again for a really hot story! No time to say more. i'm off to read more of your stories! ~david
Anonymous
12/28/20, 5:02 AM
One of the hottest hypnosis stories i've read! Thank you so much! Of course hypnosis, TPE, loss of control are all key fetishes for me. And including a threesome which represented a male hierarchy was that much more arousing! Over-riding all of this though was how real you made it all seem. The additional wrinkle throughout is the first person narrative by an unknown person who seems to be a stalker. This aspect of the story adds a vague level of mystery and tension to the story. i am very much looking forward to reading that part. In the meantime though, like New Guy In Town i am really enjoying the initial threesome, so i am hoping you plan to encourage us readers to fall thoroughly in love with the current characters before moving onto that phase of the story. Thanks again! ~david
12/28/20, 4:40 AM
Oooooh this premise is really really interesting and so far I think you've pulled it off really well! Oblivious-controller mass hypnosis (or whatever you want to call it) is *fun* and I haven't come across it before. I like a lot of the specifics you've done so far and the way you've shifted perspective. I'm really curious to see where you go from here! It feels like you've pooossibly set up a bit of a mystery as to how and why this is all happening and it'll be cool to see it unfold if you go that route. I'm also curious to see how you handle the massive throng of people outside if you continue, and how Aaron's character will change as he starts to realize what's happening. Great to see a new writer around, and great first story to post here!!