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Slave steve
12/27/20, 6:21 PM
Fantastic idea and concept.
Slave steve
12/27/20, 6:06 PM
Great story
Anonymous
12/27/20, 5:19 PM
this is so wholesome! he just wants to fit in and have friends but is afraid he'll mess up and thats so precious. Hope you'll update soon
12/27/20, 5:09 PM
yay for more of this series. I live it.
12/27/20, 4:04 PM
Seconded about requesting more chapters! A very interesting storyline with lots of places to flesh out and carry on a narrative. I look forward to your future writings! On a slight continuity note: If Toby gets off on a little bit of physical violence, that's lovely, but when Spenser shoulders him in the hall, it makes it seem like the statement made at the beginning is a little generous. "Friendly but cool" to me sounds like, 'Oh, hi.' and then purposeful ignoring or avoidance in the halls, not shoulder checks. Typically if I'm getting shoulder checked by someone in school, work, or out in the world, I am not going to feel prolonged friendly vibes towards that person, but that could be a 'ME' thing. Still, the shoulder check in the hall (which makes me wonder if this a high school or college) seems like a petty grievance that Toby would be paying back for with the shoving and kicking, which could potentially be defined by a helpful flashback or two.
Dec 26, 2020
12/27/20, 3:48 PM
i hope to see more
Dec 26, 2020
12/27/20, 2:30 PM
Loved this story - it was great to see you back in action. And I also enjoyed that we got a unique way of explaining the conversion process. the flashback narrative really worked for me in this case. now to get one of these devices. thanks!
12/27/20, 2:03 PM
very hot man, thank you!
Dec 27, 2020
12/27/20, 1:31 PM
looking forward to reading about transformations in other cities
12/27/20, 1:30 PM
i would've liked more detail about "deflowering" superman, but a great story and looking forward to more chapters (maybe growing his "garden"?)