Recent Comments

12/26/20, 4:18 PM
@Edlam hello again, I'm very happy to know you like it, and thanks a lot for tell me about the comments! I was wondering if the readers hadn't liked chapter 3, because nobody had said a word about it. It wasn't until you said it that I saw the option was disabled! thanks a lot for telling me, Edlam!
Dec 26, 2020
12/26/20, 3:59 PM
Would love to see a second part where the brother meets the fleshgrip
kinkyguyinsf
12/26/20, 3:46 PM
Holy crap this is hot. Desperately wish it could happen to me. This is by far my favorite kind of story on this site and I'm so happy to see another one in this category, especially one as well written as this one. Bravo!
Dec 26, 2020
EJG
12/26/20, 3:38 PM
Great story. Hmm. I'm in the realms of fantasy with imagining bigger dicks. IE 12,13,14 INCHES! They can still be slaves using their own names,just as hot,but still a hot story
Dec 26, 2020
12/26/20, 3:37 PM
Thanks, @FeedYourHead. I was trying to find a way around what Absman420 calls the "And Then the Same Thing Happened to Bob" problem, where the story starts to feel repetitive when you show the same conversion process happening again and again. I think that using embedded flashbacks--rather than telling a linear narrative--helped me depict the variations in each man's experience with the FleshGrip.
Dec 26, 2020
12/26/20, 3:31 PM
The King has returned! Hypnothrill, your stories are among my favorites, and this was a great new addition. I love how you detailed the conversion process in different ways--the end result is the same, but the paths that get there are all incredibly hot. Pure genius! :D
Anonymous
12/26/20, 3:29 PM
really hot work, love the way they fall into male on male desire
Dec 26, 2020
BPtime
12/26/20, 3:14 PM
Do you think they ship overseas? One hot read for Boxing Day, thanks!
12/26/20, 3:11 PM
I loved this story. It subverted my expectations but I still got everything I wanted and needed from it. Still kinda sad it ended
Jason
12/26/20, 1:12 PM
****Awesome story!**** Keep it up!