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12/26/20, 9:46 AM
Since we've collaborated before, Ng5, I'm going to be frank with you. From my POV, this is a deeply dystopian story that thinks it's a utopian one. To me, it's creepy as fuck that Cody only feels "happy" once he's conformed to the expectations of a white collar job and professional career. And it's even creepier that he only achieves this when he's somewhat tricked into being hypnotized by these uncanny twins who remove his free will, give him a number instead of a name, manage all his finances, and decide whether he'll ever be free again. It's clear that this is supposed to be a model ethical dom/sub relationship, but it just doesn't work for me at all. Don't get me wrong: this is a well-written story, and I still found parts of it to be arousing. But it was trying to sell me on a certain ideology that I just wasn't buying.
12/26/20, 9:45 AM
This was excellent, great work. And if you do decide to do more, I know where you'll find one eager reader!
BearBoi
12/26/20, 9:36 AM
looking forward to see the effects of all those sodas, since you do behavioural changes so nicely. Too many man-to-fag stories don't have a recipricol man-to-daddy-bear counterpart to make it all five times better, so here's looking forward to either of the roomies mainlining the Brut Beer and Poppa Pop <3 (it's sounding like Jeff might get tricked into Sisselixer, and Mike will take the Brut Beer for variety at this point :P)
Dec 26, 2020
Anonymous
12/26/20, 9:28 AM
terrific!!
Anonymous
12/26/20, 9:27 AM
excellent work!!
12/26/20, 9:07 AM
What a great twist on the satyr transformation genre! Transporting it into a totally different setting like an auto mechanic's garage, makes the genre feel fresh again. I'm curious to see what happens next, especially to Dale and Chet out in the office.
Ng5
12/26/20, 8:59 AM
Why does there need to be a struggle against hypnosis? I feel like that is an unnecessary and overused plot device that is painting the false impression that every hypnotist is a villain or that the post and pre hypnotized versions of a person are always going to be at odds. In the narrative of a stereotypical straight society, having that resistance makes sense. But when all stories are like that, I cant help but cry at night at the thought that not even hypnosis, a personal kink for me - a subject-, is going to be filled with nothing but tragedy and inner turmoil, which are antithesis to the motivation for joy.
Dec 26, 2020
12/26/20, 8:41 AM
Such a hot conversion story, gets my Boxing day off to a rock hard start!
Dec 26, 2020
hypnosub
12/26/20, 8:25 AM
i can't even tell you how psyched i was to see you had posted again! we missed your stories!! and this one didn't disappoint - it was super hot. i wish i got a fleshgrip for christmas
Dec 26, 2020
Anonymous
12/26/20, 7:34 AM
In case the image at the end isn't loading for you guys, you should be able to find it [here](https://www.lpsg.com/attachments/tumblr_o8dupy5d671u5ah3lo1_1280-jpg.26322471/). It looks like the link is only accessible to LPSG members, so if you don't feel like registering for a free membership to that group, then you can message me or e-mail me at hypnothrill@yahoo.com, and I can send you the picture.