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nycboot
1/26/25, 5:45 PM
I'm confused: Is this the end of the story? Or just a proposed ending and you're going to come up with another ending? Personally, i don't think anything else could beat this ending. I've remarked that some part of the story feel like a 1940s serial, but this final installment totally hits the mark of contemporary life, in that Rocky & Colt are sharing their feelings. You're really a master of manipulating the reader (in a good way!) - those last vestiges of Leviathan's power were so tension-producing, and Rocky's ability to overcome them felt like a major catharsis (for the reader!). This really was a wonderful series - it's kinda amusing that at the outset, we're in Colt's point of view, but by the end things have shifted so that we're at Rocky's point of view. At at least personally, the lack of sex between Colt and Rocky is a nice thing in that you (the author) is forced to describe their feelings in words and not resort to sexual activity. My one criticism: I never listen to pop music, so although I know the name George Michael I don't know that song at all. Perhaps if you had reproduced some of the lyrics, those of us who are pop-challenged would know the details what's going on. Thanks for a wonderfully rewarding series!
1/26/25, 5:12 PM
Your stories are truly so amazing. The details you put in! Thank you for sharing your work!
hairyartist
1/26/25, 2:43 PM
thanks for adding to one of my favorite series, I love it

1/26/25, 4:33 PM
@[hairyartist](/user/show/10013526) Do you picture yourself as Alan or Thor?
Adonis
1/25/25, 1:15 PM
So good! Loved the perspective swap! More from the ODT centre please!

1/26/25, 4:27 PM
@[Adonis](/user/show/10024130) I definitely love the idea of doing at least one more story here, just not sure what that one should focus on ha. Glad you enjoyed!
Anonymous
1/25/25, 1:31 AM
Have always adored your writing! As usual; a super creative, hot, and deliciously lewd read. Keep em coming

1/26/25, 4:26 PM
@Anonymous Tysm! That means a lot man
1/26/25, 1:22 PM
Thx guys, your kind comments inspire me to continue. The next chapter "black sabbath" is coming soon 😊
May 10, 2019
Anonymous
12/28/19, 7:47 AM
This kinda sounds like Jakes new daddy.. did you write that one? If so, do you know what happened to it? Been looking everywhere :( Its my favorite.

Lampshade15
1/26/25, 12:44 PM
@Anonymous I know this is a reply 6 years later (time flies!) but this sounds like "Daddy's Boy" by MCBrain at mcstories.com: https://mcstories.com/DaddysBoy/DaddysBoy.html
Lampshade15
1/26/25, 12:11 PM
As hot as always! I'm glad you've come back with another story, your work really turns me on. I love seeing villainous daddies win.
1/26/25, 11:12 AM
welcome again...
gdlosh13@gmail.com
1/26/25, 8:39 AM
I am sure i will. I can't wait for more