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Dec 24, 2020
Evan
12/24/20, 10:24 PM
Poor Derek. But I love the idea of being made into an obedient cock slut so even though Gary's a jerk, it's still hot. :) Hope Derek comes to enjoy his new roles.
Anonymous
12/24/20, 10:13 PM
Thanks for a great story! i love the way Dan's somewhat fumbling use of voodoo lead to the final situation in which what he got was exactly what he wanted, just not quite what he expected. i'm not quite sure how voodoo process is supposed to work, but it seems Dan didn't get it quite right. The sense of the invoked supernatural slowly taking over both their minds with a fully aware sense of creeping foreboding and loss of control is what makes this story exceptionally hot for me. Your description of their awareness of their loss of control, the desperate scuffle over the dolls, and your ending in which the gay bottom submissive guy inadvertently becomes Jordan's slave was incredibly arousing!. The unexpected twist was a nice touch. This is one of my favorites stories on the site! So thanks again! i am really looking forward to more of your writing, making you my favorite author, and becoming one of your biggest fans! And you didn't even have to use a voodoo doll to make me compliment you so fervently! You didn't, did you?! i do feel an undeniable need to prostrate myself and worship your Master Storyteller status.
12/24/20, 10:01 PM
Thank you @robbotg99x4you!! I think cheesy/corny is my brand 😂 To answer your questions: Jack liked Marvin and wanted Marvin to come clean about what he and the twins did. He wanted to give him a chance to confess and own up to it when questioned in the ca. When he realized Marvin wasn't gonna change his ways or admit wrong doing he moved forward with getting him on the naughty list and manipulating him until he had him where he wanted him If I understand your second part, After Christmas, The elfs would stay in the North Pole and continue to be used for work making toys year round. Basically Santa's slaves! ;D Their minds will not resist.
12/24/20, 9:39 PM
Hi, Great story. I love stories that are corny. And to the question, what if Marvin came clean, and about what ? the fact he liked Jack? or . What about after Chrismas, as it is slow in januray. time off for the elfs. To be a Elf, All ways like that job.
12/24/20, 9:12 PM
@ForgottenCradle: Yeah, in my mind, I had most of that down to his conditioning, but some of it is also genuinely him. He *does* know that he makes bad decisions, so it's sort of a relief for him when someone else takes charge. @Jgak: I've got several chapters of Web of Trust at least partially complete, including the next one. So, they shouldn't be too long. It's really just down to when I have time and feel up to finishing them off. There'll be more of Cop A Feel as well.
12/24/20, 7:37 PM
Great start. That sounds like the most confusing hangover morning possible.
12/24/20, 6:39 PM
Very excited to see where this goes!
Anonymous
12/24/20, 6:09 PM
Great story! I've wondered where you've been!
12/24/20, 4:18 PM
Holy WOW!! Great work!!!
12/24/20, 4:05 PM
I loved the way you described the masculinization in this story, especially the way you described David getting hairier, beefier, an muskier. All around, a good short story!