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Dec 24, 2020
12/25/20, 12:39 AM
Major kudos to @MaxRPotter for the inspiration! Happy Holidays everyone!
Dec 24, 2020
12/25/20, 12:37 AM
Totally my thing! I know a rugby player and nerd who should double-date them, ahahaha.
Dec 24, 2020
12/24/20, 11:47 PM
Awwwwww! This is probably the sweetest, yet also the hottest story I've read here! Thanks.
12/24/20, 11:15 PM
I could read Derek Williams' fantasies 24/7. Always so enjoyable! steve10185@hotmail.com
12/24/20, 10:59 PM
Fun story -- loaded with Xmas puns and playful sentences! Hope you get your Xmas wish, pup!
Dec 24, 2020
12/24/20, 10:47 PM
Another sweet Xmas mind-control love story. Awesome!
12/24/20, 10:37 PM
loving it!
Dec 24, 2020
12/24/20, 10:29 PM
Thats sweet!
Dec 24, 2020
Evan
12/24/20, 10:24 PM
Poor Derek. But I love the idea of being made into an obedient cock slut so even though Gary's a jerk, it's still hot. :) Hope Derek comes to enjoy his new roles.
Anonymous
12/24/20, 10:13 PM
Thanks for a great story! i love the way Dan's somewhat fumbling use of voodoo lead to the final situation in which what he got was exactly what he wanted, just not quite what he expected. i'm not quite sure how voodoo process is supposed to work, but it seems Dan didn't get it quite right. The sense of the invoked supernatural slowly taking over both their minds with a fully aware sense of creeping foreboding and loss of control is what makes this story exceptionally hot for me. Your description of their awareness of their loss of control, the desperate scuffle over the dolls, and your ending in which the gay bottom submissive guy inadvertently becomes Jordan's slave was incredibly arousing!. The unexpected twist was a nice touch. This is one of my favorites stories on the site! So thanks again! i am really looking forward to more of your writing, making you my favorite author, and becoming one of your biggest fans! And you didn't even have to use a voodoo doll to make me compliment you so fervently! You didn't, did you?! i do feel an undeniable need to prostrate myself and worship your Master Storyteller status.