Recent Comments

12/24/20, 12:51 AM
I cannot believe it took this long for me to notice you'd finished this! This story shaped a whole ton of tastes and kinks (That sexy Yamir chapter being the highlight and then the last two, woof!) for me, I'm so glad you've finished this and it was a great end. Wow, what a Christmas present to myself haha. Thanks so much for continuing this to a satisfactory end. if only One could end up like Yamir....minus the nearly turned into a vessel for a bored sex demon god thing.
12/24/20, 12:43 AM
that was both logical and fucking outstanding! the whole premise sounds both plausible as well as freely voluntary, which gave it an added level of beauty. hats off and dicks up to you my friend!
12/24/20, 12:21 AM
very hot love to see a second part
12/23/20, 11:54 PM
A young dom and an old sub, I'm in
12/23/20, 11:24 PM
Great story!
12/23/20, 11:20 PM
Awesome!Would you like to continue this story? I really want to see hoshi royma and nikomaru nidai become a loyal muscle rubber drone!
12/23/20, 11:05 PM
Excited to see this finally up! It was a great read! Anxious for more.
12/23/20, 10:45 PM
Appreciate the effort that went into writing this story. I do have one criticism which applies to many of the mass mind-control stories. I feel like the strippers/porno/camslut ending as the motivation for mass mind control has been used and abused beyond reason. It's like a thought-terminating cliche. It's basically fine for this story, where it's limited to a single gym. It becomes especially glaring when the story revolves around government or military with sophisticated (and assuredly incredibly expensive) science-fiction mind control technology. Just my 2 cents, and not me bashing this story, which I did enjoy.
12/23/20, 10:22 PM
@Felipe Lanzan Thank you! I had no plans for a part 2 but you never know! Plenty of bad people out there 😉 Perhaps next Chistmas season!
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12/23/20, 10:05 PM
I really want to see what will happen o the pastor