Recent Comments

Martin
12/23/20, 4:25 PM
Breathtakingly hot!
12/23/20, 4:05 PM
I enjoy the themes of this story but was taken out of it by the disconnect created by conflicting descriptions of the protagonist. Was he an alpha, "titan of industry" (at 26, the latter is unbelievable, certainly for the financial industry), or was he a repressed virginal nerd? The story would have been served by a more coherent protagonist who had some sort of consistent personality.
12/23/20, 3:59 PM
mhhhhh,the sex scene in which the subject doesn't know it's a sex scene is a nice Touch. I like you Gavin just rationalized and accepted his role as a sub
12/23/20, 3:02 PM
looking forward to reading more to find out where this is going....
12/23/20, 1:16 PM
good so far. would like to read more to c what happens next.....
12/23/20, 1:02 PM
@Zurich Thank you man! That part was fun to write. I'm sure Aj & Dj have a different opinion than you 😂
12/23/20, 12:48 PM
good to see this carrying on. If Dave can program the suits, i cant see why the hosts f the suits cant be programmed as well
12/23/20, 10:29 AM
keep going
12/23/20, 10:22 AM
Wish these would continue
12/23/20, 8:22 AM
Awesome story. Hope there is a sequel in the future.