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12/23/20, 11:20 PM
Awesome!Would you like to continue this story? I really want to see hoshi royma and nikomaru nidai become a loyal muscle rubber drone!
12/23/20, 11:05 PM
Excited to see this finally up! It was a great read! Anxious for more.
12/23/20, 10:45 PM
Appreciate the effort that went into writing this story. I do have one criticism which applies to many of the mass mind-control stories. I feel like the strippers/porno/camslut ending as the motivation for mass mind control has been used and abused beyond reason. It's like a thought-terminating cliche. It's basically fine for this story, where it's limited to a single gym. It becomes especially glaring when the story revolves around government or military with sophisticated (and assuredly incredibly expensive) science-fiction mind control technology. Just my 2 cents, and not me bashing this story, which I did enjoy.
12/23/20, 10:22 PM
@Felipe Lanzan Thank you! I had no plans for a part 2 but you never know! Plenty of bad people out there 😉 Perhaps next Chistmas season!
Anonymous
12/23/20, 10:05 PM
I really want to see what will happen o the pastor
12/23/20, 9:57 PM
will we see more of this?
EntrancedGay92
12/23/20, 9:22 PM
Thank you all for the kind words. This story is a bit on the basic side, compared to my usual fare; but I enjoyed writing it during the cosmic event. I see some requests for more details, in what areas exactly? The sexual encounters, the conversion process, or just more plot? All feedback is welcomed! Feel free to message me on Discord anytime to chat, if you'd like.
Tom.
12/23/20, 9:20 PM
Any updates on when the next part will be out??
12/23/20, 8:39 PM
Lovely Story! Thanks and Congratulations! Hopefully you can do a part 2? Lol awesome job!
Lakritz24
12/23/20, 7:39 PM
Oh, die Namen passen und auch der Ort, nur hat sich in Wahrheit der Jan geweigert ein erstes "Opfer" zu versklaven. So geht die Geschichte einen anderen Weg nun.