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1/26/25, 7:57 PM
Yeah this feels incomplete what dose the jock milk in the bulba do what after running dry and so on
1/26/25, 7:52 PM
Sad to see there are not more chapters of this one. There are so many ways this one could go. Maybe you can continue?
1/23/25, 2:54 AM
I didn't catch that you brought back Nathan from an earlier story about the ring when I read through the story the first time.

1/25/25, 1:52 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) I guess I am sneaky.

1/26/25, 7:41 PM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) :)
Steve
1/21/25, 12:02 AM
Now that was a turn of events!

1/26/25, 6:54 PM
@[Steve](/user/show/10037951) Hopefully a fun one. I was gonna go the way you think that story is headed but I know when I was really yoked and hot I loved to fuck with dudes soooo
Hairyartist
1/26/25, 5:54 PM
I love imagining myself as both characters but have a special thrill from imagining myself as Thor

1/26/25, 6:52 PM
@Hairyartist I modeled Thor on myself so I know what you mean!
1/26/25, 6:06 PM
Charles’s whisper has a well known saxophone part and has over the years become a bit of a meme. And it isn’t the end. Just a what if ending. There is at least two more parts.
nycboot
1/26/25, 5:45 PM
I'm confused: Is this the end of the story? Or just a proposed ending and you're going to come up with another ending? Personally, i don't think anything else could beat this ending. I've remarked that some part of the story feel like a 1940s serial, but this final installment totally hits the mark of contemporary life, in that Rocky & Colt are sharing their feelings. You're really a master of manipulating the reader (in a good way!) - those last vestiges of Leviathan's power were so tension-producing, and Rocky's ability to overcome them felt like a major catharsis (for the reader!). This really was a wonderful series - it's kinda amusing that at the outset, we're in Colt's point of view, but by the end things have shifted so that we're at Rocky's point of view. At at least personally, the lack of sex between Colt and Rocky is a nice thing in that you (the author) is forced to describe their feelings in words and not resort to sexual activity. My one criticism: I never listen to pop music, so although I know the name George Michael I don't know that song at all. Perhaps if you had reproduced some of the lyrics, those of us who are pop-challenged would know the details what's going on. Thanks for a wonderfully rewarding series!
1/26/25, 5:12 PM
Your stories are truly so amazing. The details you put in! Thank you for sharing your work!
hairyartist
1/26/25, 2:43 PM
thanks for adding to one of my favorite series, I love it

1/26/25, 4:33 PM
@[hairyartist](/user/show/10013526) Do you picture yourself as Alan or Thor?
Adonis
1/25/25, 1:15 PM
So good! Loved the perspective swap! More from the ODT centre please!

1/26/25, 4:27 PM
@[Adonis](/user/show/10024130) I definitely love the idea of doing at least one more story here, just not sure what that one should focus on ha. Glad you enjoyed!