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Dec 20, 2020
12/21/20, 11:37 AM
Very imaginative!
CigarMuscle
12/21/20, 11:24 AM
hell yea! fantastic work!!
12/21/20, 9:36 AM
Love this! Great intense writing
12/21/20, 9:14 AM
Nice loving this series! I was wondering if it's possible for them to restore Kyle's personality and make him aware of whats happening to him but cant disobey any of his commands. Think it'll be even hotter if he's aware and unwilling all the while the thugs have their way with the hunky superhero!
RicanCub
12/21/20, 8:19 AM
very interesting start
giveintothemusk
12/21/20, 7:32 AM
Great start to a story
12/21/20, 4:50 AM
Great story! It left me wanting more.
Anonymous
12/21/20, 4:26 AM
wonderful
Dec 20, 2020
12/21/20, 4:26 AM
loved it!! I hadn't thought of it but the Poke-ball idea and "I own you" thing really made this super hot. what I would love to see is how much "control" Gary has over these guys. in a word despite Ash being a guy or anyone for that matter if Gary was to use the comment breed/impregnate (get pregnant) what would happen. and if not entirely disgusting... maybe turn his own Pokemon on him... make Ash their bitch (I know this one might be too much)
Dec 20, 2020
12/21/20, 2:38 AM
I liked your story, loved the concept. Would like to see what other "moves" Gary can order them to do, or if he caught any other trainers for them to play with.