Recent Comments

12/21/20, 9:14 AM
Nice loving this series! I was wondering if it's possible for them to restore Kyle's personality and make him aware of whats happening to him but cant disobey any of his commands. Think it'll be even hotter if he's aware and unwilling all the while the thugs have their way with the hunky superhero!
RicanCub
12/21/20, 8:19 AM
very interesting start
giveintothemusk
12/21/20, 7:32 AM
Great start to a story
12/21/20, 4:50 AM
Great story! It left me wanting more.
Anonymous
12/21/20, 4:26 AM
wonderful
Dec 20, 2020
12/21/20, 4:26 AM
loved it!! I hadn't thought of it but the Poke-ball idea and "I own you" thing really made this super hot. what I would love to see is how much "control" Gary has over these guys. in a word despite Ash being a guy or anyone for that matter if Gary was to use the comment breed/impregnate (get pregnant) what would happen. and if not entirely disgusting... maybe turn his own Pokemon on him... make Ash their bitch (I know this one might be too much)
Dec 20, 2020
12/21/20, 2:38 AM
I liked your story, loved the concept. Would like to see what other "moves" Gary can order them to do, or if he caught any other trainers for them to play with.
12/21/20, 1:43 AM
It was an interesting story. If you want to add some tension what about Brady and Jonas meet up somehow and discover that Hudson has Jonas' plans for the device. They trick Hudson and turn him into a top or perhaps they make him an ultra bottom who obeys their every whim.
12/21/20, 1:26 AM
A great story!
12/21/20, 1:16 AM
You have an interesting choice of kinks in your stories!