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nycboot
12/21/20, 12:33 AM
I'll echo Elmara's thoughts. I hope you're ok. Sure, we're all whores to want "more, more, more!" but I also hope that you're ok and that it's just the stresses of life that prevent you from supplying a new chapter.
nycboot
12/21/20, 12:32 AM
I liked the story, although it went by pretty quickly. But the thing is: I keep coming back to it. That shows it really is good - that my mind can't let go of it. :)
Dec 20, 2020
12/21/20, 12:09 AM
This was delightfully strange and hot and made me so, so curious about the world around this story and what will happen next! I hope you decide to continue!
12/20/20, 11:28 PM
Nice little short story; just the right amount of suspicion on Tommy's part to make the story work. I like the coincidences that lead Tommy down the road as a man who follows the whole coincidence takes planning line of thought.
Dec 20, 2020
12/20/20, 11:12 PM
Hmm, I'm mixed about this story. Pokemon has storylines where hypnosis is used, so it's fertile ground for a hypnosis story. But I'm not really feeling this idea. Sure Gary (aka Shigeru in Japanese) and Ash (aka Takashi) start off as rivals, but they become friends. But I'm not feeling the whole pokeball idea; using a pokemon to control them would seem a better angle to play.
Dec 20, 2020
12/20/20, 9:58 PM
hot as hell
12/20/20, 9:07 PM
SEQUEL?! please continue!!
Dec 20, 2020
12/20/20, 8:44 PM
loved it interesting concept
12/20/20, 8:32 PM
The next chapter focuses on Gavin alone with Dr. Cullen rather than having his father around. The final chapter is more about the father, but also the combination of the three of them (which is where the #incest tag really kicks in).
12/20/20, 7:38 PM
How about going into a different direction. Maybe a day/night by day the masculine strong masculine man but at night due to his treatment of women and towards his own gay son, he becomes the thing he fears & hates the most. A personality between Dr. Frank-n-Furter from Rock Horror Picture Show and Divine from the John Water Movies but the top liner for the drag show but also heavy into SM but by being the masochist as a way to pay for the abuse he heap on his son. Keep him aware of he's straight but the idea thrills him and he looks for gay men to use him in their dungeons.