Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/21/20, 4:26 AM
wonderful
Dec 20, 2020
12/21/20, 4:26 AM
loved it!! I hadn't thought of it but the Poke-ball idea and "I own you" thing really made this super hot. what I would love to see is how much "control" Gary has over these guys. in a word despite Ash being a guy or anyone for that matter if Gary was to use the comment breed/impregnate (get pregnant) what would happen. and if not entirely disgusting... maybe turn his own Pokemon on him... make Ash their bitch (I know this one might be too much)
Dec 20, 2020
12/21/20, 2:38 AM
I liked your story, loved the concept. Would like to see what other "moves" Gary can order them to do, or if he caught any other trainers for them to play with.
12/21/20, 1:43 AM
It was an interesting story. If you want to add some tension what about Brady and Jonas meet up somehow and discover that Hudson has Jonas' plans for the device. They trick Hudson and turn him into a top or perhaps they make him an ultra bottom who obeys their every whim.
12/21/20, 1:26 AM
A great story!
12/21/20, 1:16 AM
You have an interesting choice of kinks in your stories!
Dec 18, 2020
12/21/20, 1:03 AM
This is extremely hot
nycboot
12/21/20, 12:33 AM
I'll echo Elmara's thoughts. I hope you're ok. Sure, we're all whores to want "more, more, more!" but I also hope that you're ok and that it's just the stresses of life that prevent you from supplying a new chapter.
nycboot
12/21/20, 12:32 AM
I liked the story, although it went by pretty quickly. But the thing is: I keep coming back to it. That shows it really is good - that my mind can't let go of it. :)
Dec 20, 2020
12/21/20, 12:09 AM
This was delightfully strange and hot and made me so, so curious about the world around this story and what will happen next! I hope you decide to continue!