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Dec 20, 2020
12/20/20, 11:12 PM
Hmm, I'm mixed about this story. Pokemon has storylines where hypnosis is used, so it's fertile ground for a hypnosis story. But I'm not really feeling this idea. Sure Gary (aka Shigeru in Japanese) and Ash (aka Takashi) start off as rivals, but they become friends. But I'm not feeling the whole pokeball idea; using a pokemon to control them would seem a better angle to play.
Dec 20, 2020
12/20/20, 9:58 PM
hot as hell
12/20/20, 9:07 PM
SEQUEL?! please continue!!
Dec 20, 2020
12/20/20, 8:44 PM
loved it interesting concept
12/20/20, 8:32 PM
The next chapter focuses on Gavin alone with Dr. Cullen rather than having his father around. The final chapter is more about the father, but also the combination of the three of them (which is where the #incest tag really kicks in).
12/20/20, 7:38 PM
How about going into a different direction. Maybe a day/night by day the masculine strong masculine man but at night due to his treatment of women and towards his own gay son, he becomes the thing he fears & hates the most. A personality between Dr. Frank-n-Furter from Rock Horror Picture Show and Divine from the John Water Movies but the top liner for the drag show but also heavy into SM but by being the masochist as a way to pay for the abuse he heap on his son. Keep him aware of he's straight but the idea thrills him and he looks for gay men to use him in their dungeons.
12/20/20, 7:38 PM
Thanks. I'm not in love with how this little trilogy went - it feels disjointed and lacking a clear tension to me. I appreciate the kudos, but I don't think I'd write this again.
K77
12/20/20, 3:48 PM
Great storytelling! Please keep writing more! I can't wait to see how this develops.
12/20/20, 1:00 PM
Ethan Gets Burgled
Dec 20, 2020
12/20/20, 12:56 PM
I liked this story. Hope you continue it, would love to see what else he makes them do.