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Dec 20, 2020
12/21/20, 2:38 AM
I liked your story, loved the concept. Would like to see what other "moves" Gary can order them to do, or if he caught any other trainers for them to play with.
12/21/20, 1:43 AM
It was an interesting story. If you want to add some tension what about Brady and Jonas meet up somehow and discover that Hudson has Jonas' plans for the device. They trick Hudson and turn him into a top or perhaps they make him an ultra bottom who obeys their every whim.
12/21/20, 1:26 AM
A great story!
12/21/20, 1:16 AM
You have an interesting choice of kinks in your stories!
Dec 18, 2020
12/21/20, 1:03 AM
This is extremely hot
nycboot
12/21/20, 12:33 AM
I'll echo Elmara's thoughts. I hope you're ok. Sure, we're all whores to want "more, more, more!" but I also hope that you're ok and that it's just the stresses of life that prevent you from supplying a new chapter.
nycboot
12/21/20, 12:32 AM
I liked the story, although it went by pretty quickly. But the thing is: I keep coming back to it. That shows it really is good - that my mind can't let go of it. :)
Dec 20, 2020
12/21/20, 12:09 AM
This was delightfully strange and hot and made me so, so curious about the world around this story and what will happen next! I hope you decide to continue!
12/20/20, 11:28 PM
Nice little short story; just the right amount of suspicion on Tommy's part to make the story work. I like the coincidences that lead Tommy down the road as a man who follows the whole coincidence takes planning line of thought.
Dec 20, 2020
12/20/20, 11:12 PM
Hmm, I'm mixed about this story. Pokemon has storylines where hypnosis is used, so it's fertile ground for a hypnosis story. But I'm not really feeling this idea. Sure Gary (aka Shigeru in Japanese) and Ash (aka Takashi) start off as rivals, but they become friends. But I'm not feeling the whole pokeball idea; using a pokemon to control them would seem a better angle to play.