Recent Comments

12/19/20, 1:31 PM
Really hot and very imaginative! I'm so happy with this!
Anonymous
12/19/20, 12:50 PM
How about the next chapter. I want to know what demon will be doing next.
Dec 17, 2020
12/19/20, 12:21 PM
I really liked this, but I thought it would have been a bit easier to read on the computer screen with shorter paragraphs. Also, I had difficulty telling the two younger men apart in the last paragraph, since they were both described as "boy."
Anonymous
12/19/20, 11:39 AM
I wouldn't fight this either. I would love this.
12/19/20, 11:23 AM
> Another sequel please > Working on it right now!
PupBoner™
12/19/20, 9:27 AM
I would never fight this transformation, i lust for this experience so much. I really want to be Austin. Really horny story....wuuf 🐾🐾 https://vm.tiktok.com/ZSn1pbxt/
12/19/20, 8:48 AM
i think, if i were edgar, i had the same quick transition from reporter to willing soldier XD or even quicker....
12/19/20, 8:38 AM
It's great story. Keep it up!
Anonymous
12/19/20, 8:33 AM
i cannot waitttt for especially for the tasks during the week
12/19/20, 7:55 AM
I really liked some elements of the story, including the central sex scene where we see the snake-men transforming others. But I felt like the pacing was a little off. So much of the story is spent with Edgar investigating this mystery of Alpha Cpmpany, which might have worked better if we got rising erotic tension in these scenes; for instance, we could have seen Eric acting more like an infatuated puppy-dog around his alpha, Dalton, and we could have had more scenes of Edgar falling under Dalton's thrall as well. To me, that would have made the ending more plausible, because Edgar goes from "suspicious investigative reporter" to "willing recruit" very quickly.