Recent Comments

Dec 17, 2020
12/18/20, 11:22 PM
love it. continuation? would enjoy a back story and next episodes.
12/18/20, 10:51 PM
I like the continuing dumbing down of Brady -- the longer he's a top, the dumber he seems to get... This is a terrific chapter! Keep it up!
12/18/20, 10:11 PM
Please continue this!
12/18/20, 9:39 PM
Nice story; definitely like the setup and the payoff. My only critique is why get rid of Edgar's journalism; having a journalist in your pocket could be of use to the cause. Edge could work for the military paper feeding mis/disinformation as needed and thereby aiding the takedown. But again nice work on the story.
Dec 17, 2020
12/18/20, 9:06 PM
That was a hot story. It is primed to be turned into a series!
12/18/20, 8:46 PM
Hot story! Love to read another story of an evil doctor slowly corrupting unsuspecting good old family man and son. Looking forward to the next chapters to see how Gavin will lose his virginity.
Dec 17, 2020
12/18/20, 8:30 PM
Interesting premise! Curious to know what's deeper story of the house and what else will happen in it and to the men.
tomnLALove
12/18/20, 7:03 PM
Love where this story is heading. Love the idea of transformation and turning Scottie more and more into a little boy scout!
Jul 27, 2020
12/18/20, 7:01 PM
Looked up the rest of your stuff after Killer Gains, and you don't disappoint! There's definitely a sequel or two in this storyline. Hope you agree!
Dec 18, 2020
12/18/20, 6:36 PM
Love this! The most basic kind of mind control, reward for correct behavior, done so deliciously. And the way the devices' actual purpose was to build muscle... You can guess from my handle on here that I am a *big* fan of gym-based stories. The scenes where he's reacting to being moved into the correct positions, the touch of those guiding hands, were especially relatable. The plot didn't go at all like I expected - I figured Frank had to be getting some action at some point. I would love to see this story continued, especially if they can get their hands on those sensors again. Maybe Frank got them from a kinky engineer friend of his, and he or they track the other down? Maybe the new ones have been perfected somehow, or some new behaviors to be rewarded have been added...? Once it seemed that Frank didn't intend the sexual side effects, at first I thought there wasn't a clear justification for such a straight-to-gay transformation (unless, as I said, the hypothetical actual engineer put that stuff in). Looking back at it, though, I think what you're doing is showing what happens when the real life homoerotic elements of weightlifting/bodybuilding/gym culture are rewarded along with all the other elements - and that's fucking *awesome*!