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12/19/20, 8:48 AM
i think, if i were edgar, i had the same quick transition from reporter to willing soldier XD or even quicker....
12/19/20, 8:38 AM
It's great story. Keep it up!
Anonymous
12/19/20, 8:33 AM
i cannot waitttt for especially for the tasks during the week
12/19/20, 7:55 AM
I really liked some elements of the story, including the central sex scene where we see the snake-men transforming others. But I felt like the pacing was a little off. So much of the story is spent with Edgar investigating this mystery of Alpha Cpmpany, which might have worked better if we got rising erotic tension in these scenes; for instance, we could have seen Eric acting more like an infatuated puppy-dog around his alpha, Dalton, and we could have had more scenes of Edgar falling under Dalton's thrall as well. To me, that would have made the ending more plausible, because Edgar goes from "suspicious investigative reporter" to "willing recruit" very quickly.
Lusty Stallion
12/19/20, 7:42 AM
Eigio - well that is one crazy situation right there. It's not fully my sort of thing, although I might try a slightly different version. Kids going for their folks isn't my cup of tea, but the transformation could be really hot and they end up with their sons pals?
12/19/20, 7:21 AM
No lie, this is pretty close to one of my favourite fantasies. So fucking hot!
12/19/20, 6:49 AM
man that was fucking incredible. I hope there will be more chapters!
Anonymous
12/19/20, 5:35 AM
i hope to see it continues!! Edge must bring his fellow journalist and transform him too, leading to corrupting newspaper companies and transform them into a fighter for occupation instead of guardian of civil rights lol
12/19/20, 12:54 AM
One of the best stories on this site IMHO. It has a lot going on, hits lots of fetishes. I hope you link your stories together into a series on this site.
12/19/20, 12:31 AM
Great transformation of Asher. As for my guess, it's Theodore.