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Dec 17, 2020
12/18/20, 9:06 PM
That was a hot story. It is primed to be turned into a series!
12/18/20, 8:46 PM
Hot story! Love to read another story of an evil doctor slowly corrupting unsuspecting good old family man and son. Looking forward to the next chapters to see how Gavin will lose his virginity.
Dec 17, 2020
12/18/20, 8:30 PM
Interesting premise! Curious to know what's deeper story of the house and what else will happen in it and to the men.
tomnLALove
12/18/20, 7:03 PM
Love where this story is heading. Love the idea of transformation and turning Scottie more and more into a little boy scout!
Jul 27, 2020
12/18/20, 7:01 PM
Looked up the rest of your stuff after Killer Gains, and you don't disappoint! There's definitely a sequel or two in this storyline. Hope you agree!
Dec 18, 2020
12/18/20, 6:36 PM
Love this! The most basic kind of mind control, reward for correct behavior, done so deliciously. And the way the devices' actual purpose was to build muscle... You can guess from my handle on here that I am a *big* fan of gym-based stories. The scenes where he's reacting to being moved into the correct positions, the touch of those guiding hands, were especially relatable. The plot didn't go at all like I expected - I figured Frank had to be getting some action at some point. I would love to see this story continued, especially if they can get their hands on those sensors again. Maybe Frank got them from a kinky engineer friend of his, and he or they track the other down? Maybe the new ones have been perfected somehow, or some new behaviors to be rewarded have been added...? Once it seemed that Frank didn't intend the sexual side effects, at first I thought there wasn't a clear justification for such a straight-to-gay transformation (unless, as I said, the hypothetical actual engineer put that stuff in). Looking back at it, though, I think what you're doing is showing what happens when the real life homoerotic elements of weightlifting/bodybuilding/gym culture are rewarded along with all the other elements - and that's fucking *awesome*!
12/18/20, 6:31 PM
Another author writing about uniforms and hypnosis; glad to see and read your work. This was a really enjoyable story, the group session is really nice and it's been a while since we've had a story where multiple people have pleasure through the hypnosis. I'm a bit scared about the narrating "I", why they're watching, and what their plan is. Basically they're going to upend a rather nice and enjoyable role-playing hypnosis group for some questionable and suspicious reasons. But that's a testament to your writing. Looking forward to the next part.
12/18/20, 5:44 PM
@Roland00 - Thanks bro! @Jockmorphr - Part 3 (and last) is definitely coming. Not quite sure if I'll pull it off today, but it's all plotted. @anon - Thank you sir! @Ruffcub - All I can safely say is things are going to turn out well for Jonas and Brady. @anon2 - I mean, Jonas should be a top himself when he wakes up. But I'm sure someone stands to make money from this.
eigio
12/18/20, 3:12 PM
Suggestion: Older mother and father are looking for their son at the pub. They find him and as they are relieved to find him, they both transform into gay jockstrap clad muscle hunks before his eyes. The son is initially shocked at first, then becomes attracted to them and they go upstairs for a threesome.